By Larry Fyffe
During the American Civil War, general Stonewall Jackson is accidentally shot by his own men. Surgeon Zimmerman puts the monstrous Civil War back together by gathering alliterative parts and pieces from different poets in his song ” ‘Cross The Green Mountain”:
From Julia Howe:
I have seen Him in the watch-fires of a a hundred circling camps They have builded Him an altar in the evening dews and damps I can read His righteous sentence by the dim and flaring lamps (The Battle-Hymn Of The Republic)
To this:
Altars are burning, the flames falling wide (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
From William Yeats:
Black out; Heaven blazing into the head Tragedy wrought to the utmost (Lapis Lazuli)
To this:
I cross the Green Mountain, I slept by the stream Heaven blazing in my head, I dreamt a monstrous dream (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
From Nathaniel Shepherd:
For the foe had crossed from the other side That day, in the face of murderous fire That swept them down in its terrible ire And their life-blood went to colour the tide (The Roll Call)
To this:
The foe has crossed over from the other side They tip their caps from top of a hill (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
From Henry Timrod:
But still along yon dim Atlantic line The only hostile smoke Creeps like a harmless mist above the brine From some frail floating oak (Charleston)
And from Henry Melville:
The ravaged land was miles behind And Loudon spread her landscapes rare (The Scout Toward Aldie)
To this:
All along the dim Atlantic line The ravaged land lies miles behind (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
From Henry Flash:
Not 'mid the lightning of the stormy fight Nor in the rush of the vandal foes Did kingly Death, with his resistless might Lay the great leader low
(The Death Of Stonewall Jackson)
To this:
Close the eyes of our captain, peace may he know His long night is done, the great leader is laid low (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
From Robert C. Waterston:
The memory of the just Shall still be dear, whatever their earthly lot Dust may return to dust But Virtue lives, and cannot be forgot (The Departed)
To this:
Pride will vanish, and glory will rot But virtue lives on, and cannot be forgot (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
From William Gannett:
Only ten miles from the city And how I am lifted away To the peace that passeth knowing And the night that is not day (Sunday On The Hill-Top)
To this:
I'm ten miles outside the city, and I'm lifted away In an ancient light that is not day (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
From Walt Whitman:
See, dearest mother, the letter says Pete will soon be better Alas, poor boy, he will never be better .... While they stand at home neat the door, he is dead already The only son is dead (Come Up From The Fields Father)
To this:
But he will better soon, he's in a hospital bed But he'll never be better, he's already dead (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
From Henry Longfellow:
And I saw a vision how far and fleet That fatal bullet went speeding forth .... And a bell was tolled, in that far-off town For one who had passed from cross to crown (Killed At The Ford)
To this:
The bells of evening have rung There's blasphemy on the end of the tongue Let them say that I walked in fair nature's light And that I was loyal to truth and to right (Bob Dylan: 'Cross The Green Mountain)
There be biblical allusions in ‘Cross The Green Mountain’:
And I stood upon the sand of the sea And saw a beast rise up out of the sea Having seven heads and ten horns And upon his heads the name of blasphemy (Book Of Revelations 13:1)
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A truly excellent article. Thank you
Thanks…..
” near the door” that should be …
I put various sources together.
Thanks.
I gathered various sources together ….
That should be”near the door”
Timrod be influenced by the English Romantics:
And the dim low line before
Of a dark and distant shore
(Percy Shelley: Euganean Hills)
I’m looking up into the sapphire-tinted skies
(Bob Dylan: Things Have Changed)
From the altar of dark ocean
To the sapphire-tinted skies
As the flames of sacrifice
(Percy Shelley: Euganean Hills)
Thanks … read the piece and wondered at the end if you were accusing Dylan or congratulating him, praising him. It didn’t say but thanks again for printing it…Cheers.
again: best analyses of Bobs works
What an interesting read! Thanks a lot!
I noted in a previous exegesis of ATGM here, that there is an altogether curious and unique footnote appended to its entry in The Lyrics:
Bob Dylan The Lyrics. ( 2014 ) Ed. Christopher Ricks, appears this footnote to Across The Green Mountain ;
“ref. Heroic epic; Croatian ( Southern Dalmatia ) translated from MAJA BOŠKOVIC-STULLI 1966; 1977 HEDA JASON, DIMITRI SEGAL Patterns in Oral Literature. Milan went across the green mountain. In the Kosovo epic poems, Toplica Milan ( Milan of Toplica ) is a fictional Serbian nobleman and ally of Prince Lazar who presided during the civil wars of the 1360s and 1370s and was killed in the Battle of Kosovo. In this verse, Milan returns home after being wounded and then cured by Vilas fairy queens of South Slavic folklore. “
The American ‘Hermitage’ site falsely claims that General Andrew Jackson
(not the George above) led the Americans to victory in the War of 1812.
In fact the Americans were driven from Canada and the White House burned –
known as Canada’s “War of Independence.”
The ‘Battle of New Orleans’ fought after the peace treaty had already been signed.
Sorry
*Not the Thomas (Stonewall) Jackson above