Tell Ol’ Bill: revised review of Dylan’s song with links to its origins

By Tony Attwood

This review was revised 18 January 2017

I have just seen that another of the various try out recordings of Tel Ol Bill has been put on line, so thought I would copy the link here just in case you share my enthusiasm for the song.

This is a much slowed down version seems to me not to work out so well – it reflects the tiredness of the character but it seems too forced.  But if you are interested in all the versions, stay with this because at about 6 minutes 30 seconds the band try a different version and it gives you a feel as to what they were trying to do.

But still, for me, in the slower version there is now too much emphasis on the difficulties of the singer, but to me that is never the essence of the song.  The character is at one with his surroundings, despite all the problems of his life.

The other version of the outtakes now on line which I had not heard when I wrote the original review of Tell Ol Bill, and it is an absolute must-listen.   It is at

Hearing that made me decide to do much more digging than I ever did when I wrote the first review of the song, and finally I’ve got round to putting all my thoughts together to trace the origins of the piece.

Tell Old Bill appeared in a compendium of American folk songs by Carl Sandburg’s compendium of American folksongs from 1927 which does indeed open with the lines Tell Old Bill when he gets home/Leave them downtown gals alone.

You can hear a version here:

Not at all the same as with Dylan of course – except the opening seven words.  But Dylan did record the Sanburg collected song for Self Portrait, (although it wasn’t included) so it clearly has always been on his mind.

The song is said to be derived from the Georgia Sea Islands – but sadly for me in terms of American folk music once we get beyond the music of the Appalachians (which itself was derived from English, Irish and Scottish traditional music, mixed with the Afro-American early blues), I’m completely out of my depth.  So Georgia Sea Islands music – sorry I really can’t help.

However there is a second source for this song: the Carter Family song “I never loved but one”  which has the chorus

I look around but cannot trace
One welcome word or smiling face
In gazing crowds I am alone
Because I never loved but one

So there we seem to have the two moments that started out the journey to what we now know as the Dylan song Tell ol’ Bill.    If you want to trace this further you will need the CD of the all the out takes of Dylan’s recording of the song noted above.  But do start with the Carter Family original, then listen to the album of outtakes, and notice the moment when the song moves dramatically from a major key piece into a minor key piece, and there you have the total evolution.

Oh and there is one more bit I missed before: a reference to Edgar Allen Poe’s “To one in paradise” …   (This Dylan guy don’t half do a lot of reading from a whole variety of sources!)

For, alas! alas! with me
The light of Life is o’er!
No more—no more—no more—
(Such language holds the solemn sea
To the sands upon the shore)
Shall bloom the thunder-blasted tree,
Or the stricken eagle soar!

Thunder blasted tree indeed.

But leaving aside all the musical and poetic origins the moment one hears Tell Ol’ Bill it seems to relate directly to Things Have Changed.  It is of isolation, one last idea to try.   Yes, there’s a different speed to the piece, but the whole feel of the music is similar.

There’s that misty, removed feeling in the lyrics, and very similar orchestration.   The number of chords used is limited (although Tell Ol’ Bill is in a minor key – to which it was changed around take five – while Things have Changed is in the more conventional major), but more than anything it is the feeling generated.  The feeling  through the arrangement on the Tell Tale Signs album, the feeling through the lyrics…  there is a world out there that is not quite making sense.

So wonderful is this piece at creating an image that this track alone would make Tell Tale Signs worth buying (although of course you also get Mississippi, which is also worth the cost of the whole album on its own).

Songs in minor keys usually have a sad, negative feel, yet this song bounces along.   The singer hardly has a penny to his name, but at the same time the river is whispering.  This is Dylan’s genius – to make a song of strangeness in a minor key bounce along, taking us all the way through to the line, “Anything is worth a try.”  These are reflections back to the notion of the traveller – so often a theme in Dylan, but here the traveller not of the Restless Farewell but of having reached the end of the line.

In the chordal accompaniment to the recording (which is uniquely for Dylan in B flat minor) there is that endlessly rocking G-flat major / F major interchange to introduce each line, which emphasises the opening, and which makes the whole thing rock along (Dylan himself on piano).  Yes, maybe the singer is near death (“the heavens have never seemed so near”) but this is nothing like “Not Dark Yet” – this is a man ok with his coming end.  He is running towards it, because anything is worth a try.

Thus throughout the song we have the contrasts – the rocking rhythm, the dry but well attuned voice, and these images of nameless places.

And it is only as we progress that we see there is a woman involved


You trampled on me as you passed, Left the coldest kiss upon my brow, All my doubts and fears have gone at last, I’ve nothing more to tell you now.

And it is that realisation that takes us forward:

I lay awake at night with troubled dreams

The enemy is at the gate.It is in fact a world gone wrong – a world that Dylan might have witnessed from the car in the video of “Times have changed” – a world where nothing is right, and everything is warped and twisted…

Tell Ol’ Bill when he comes home, Anything is worth a try, Tell him that I’m not alone, That the hour has come to do or die.

A composite piece taken from many different sources and inspirations, but most certainly still, an utter masterpiece.

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9 Responses to Tell Ol’ Bill: revised review of Dylan’s song with links to its origins

  1. laborpeace says:

    While your review is interesting, your ear is mistaken==”Things have changed” is also in a minor key–Gm to be specific. The chord changes are similar, but not identical to “Tell old Bill”.

  2. darla doolittle says:

    tell ol bill is a wonderful song but i see different pictures than you. i see the post-civil war man from other songs wandering back home but home can never be the same. i am not sure if the icy kiss on his brow is from a woman, a fellow soldier, a child, or just a figment of his imagination. it is night time, times are tough, he is broke, the ground is hard and its cold. its winter. the iron clouds above dump snowflakes in his hair. what a truly amazing image. and what about the piano? why not mention that? that is what makes this piece what it is. the piano is what keeps the whole thing grounded and keeps the wooden floorboards underfoot and keeps the drafts coming in the busted windows. the piano keeps bobs boots on when he crashes in that heavy bed. tired of life but hopeful for one more round.

  3. Sam says:

    Well, I don’t have a clue about keys and such.

    I only agree that this is a masterpiece – I just wonder how did I miss this for so long!

    and about the singing, I can only think about his line…
    “Nobody can sing the blues like… Bob Dylan”

  4. woppel says:

    This is about depression, the man is down and out from getting beat up by his life

  5. woppel says:

    I could change the last verse to the following and it would be a verbal abuse song… This guy is trapped and there is no way out.

    The evening sun is sinking low,
    The woods are dark, the town is too.
    She’ll drag you down, she’ll run the show.
    She will lash you black and blue.
    Tell ol’ Jill when she comes home:
    Anything is worth a try.
    Tell her that I’m not yet gone,
    That the hour has come to do or die.
    All the world I would defy,
    Let me make it plane as day.
    I look at you now and I sigh,
    How could it be any other way?

  6. Larry fyffe says:

    Dylan, under the black Existentialist cloud hanging over modenist thinking, fights with the Transendalist Romantic poets in the captain’s tower:

    The tempest struggles in thd air/
    And to myself alone I sing.

    (I celebrate myself and sing myself/
    ….For every atom belonging to me belongs to you:
    Walt Whitman)

    The woods are dark, the town is too.

    (The woods are lovely dark and deep: Robert Frost)

    Not so much with John Keats, however: “You trampled on me as you passed”…the Belle Dame Sans Merci….
    once again.

  7. Larry fyffe says:

    “I see a lily on thy brow” (Keats)

    “Left the coldest kiss upon thy brow” (Dylan)

    The dark side of Romanticism that turnes into modernist Existentialist poetry.

    And in the alleyway awaits Ol’ Bill Shakespeare in his pointed shoes and bells who penned ‘The Tempest,”

  8. Larry fyffe says:

    * Sorry…not “thy” but “my brow” writes Dylan….Won’t you come home, Bill Shakespeare/
    Won’t you come home?

  9. Dan Vanderhoof says:

    thanks for the research, this was great to read, especially the parts about what songs he used as jumping off point.

    While I agree with you about the women appearing in the song, I also wonder about the verse “Tell me straight out if you will
    Why must you torture me within?
    Why must you come down off of your high hill?
    Throw my fate to the clouds and wind”

    To me this sounds like a conversation with a deity, with God, and I guess I’m taking it a bit to literally but when I hear “high hill” and fate to the clouds and wind” I think of the greek gods, Zeus specifically when I hear these lines. Also, “left the coldest kiss upon my brow as you passed” could be a woman but its also most certainly a reference to Judas’ kissing Jesus. (Although of course Dylan has always disguised relationships with women under the mask of religion (sweetheart like you)).

    Another thing: The overall story, sound, and words always remind me of the Truffaut film ‘Shoot The Piano Player’,one of Dylan’s favorite films, and a film about a man who can’t catch a break.

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