By Tony Attwood
Not for the first time I found myself a bit confused. According to adverts this song appears on “Bob Dylan The Cutting Edge 1965 – 1966: The Bootleg Series Vol.12: Collector’s Edition” but I can’t find a complete song listing for this which includes this track on Dylan’s official site.
There is a page on the official Dylan site for this site titled “Bob Dylan the complete track listing” which is actually blank. It comes up on a Wiki search
There is another page which purports to have the full track listing but doesn’t include this song. However the discogs site does have it and there it is on disc 18 track 18 so I am sure that is right and it is the official site that is getting tangled up in songs. If they read this and notice and sort it out, I’m sure they’ll also want to drop me a note and say thank you for pointing the blank page out.
But since I am sitting here writing these reviews in my retirement when money flows not quite as freely as it did in my earlier days, I am not that moved to splash out lots and lots of the readies on buying this album specifically to get this track so I’m working for the version available on line.
But if you have the album, and this song is indeed on it, and it is a different version from that offered below, please do write in and say and then, please do write a review which we can publish here. (And even if not, if you want to write an alternative review, please do get in touch – see below).
Anyway, below is a link to this song on the internet. It is a ramble, with disconnected largely unintelligible (to me at least) lyrics, and most certainly very unfinished, but as is the way with Bob it includes some delightful moments which if turned into a song could well have given us something of another gem.
The first 40 seconds involve the two guys discussing the chord sequence and I think Bob is explaining a part which goes from B minor to E, but moving on from there we get a nice run through of a proto-song for which much of the music is worked out, but the lyrics very unclear.
At 2 minutes we get another run through. But there is no way I am going to make an absolute prat of myself attempting to make anything of the lyrics that follow.
At 3 minutes 10 seconds we get another burst at it which shows the song really beginning to come together.
Clearly in this process if Bob had continued with the song he would later have sat down with the notebook and maybe later the typewriter and set out the lyrics which would have changed over and over, in order to fit with the music – which would have evolved a little bit further.
As such there is a real value in this recording, since it does give a good insight into Bob Dylan’s approach to writing at this point. It doesn’t mean this is typical, or that he stayed with this method through the years, but it suggests that around 1966 this was his way forward.
It becomes an enjoyable prototype by the end, and you never know, it could have gone on to be a delightful light piece. All that happened was that Bob lost interest and moved on. For in those days new songs from his lips and fingers were ten a penny.
If you have a spare five minutes, and haven’t heard the piece before, do give it a listen.
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