Grooms still waiting at the altar, probably for Claudette

by Jochen Markhorst

Roy Orbison is madly in love with the teenager Claudette Frady and writes the song “Claudette” for her. Sam Phillips from Sun Records likes it a lot and has it recorded by the Everly Brothers, who eventually use it as a B-side for one of their many #1 hits: “All I Have To Do Is Dream” (1957).

With the royalties Orbison can make a down payment for his first, real Cadillac and marry his Claudette. The marriage is not long and happy. Moments later The Big O is a star, a lonely Claudette starts an affair and they divorce in November ’64, when “Oh, Pretty Woman” is high in the charts on both sides of the ocean.

But still, she really is the greatest girl that I’ve ever been with and when she visits him in hospital a few months later, after a small motorbike accident in England, they reconcile and in August ’65 they are married again.

This time the regained happiness lasts even less long. During a joint motorcycle trip, June 6, 1966, Claudette crashes on a pick-up truck and she dies on the spot.   Dylan recalls this tragedy in 2007, after he plays the original demo recording of Orbison’s “Claudette” in his Theme Time Radio Hour (episode 35: “Women’s Names”).

Claudette is, in short, not a name to be used lightly. A self-proclaimed, seasoned Orbison fan like Dylan (“There wasn’t anything else on the radio like him. I’d listen and wait for another song, but next to Roy the playlist was strictly dullsville…gutless and flabby” – Chronicles) certainly has associations with the name – evoking sooner fate and disaster than roses and moonshine.

Disaster and fate abound, subsequently, in the lyrics of that miraculous, fascinating and abundant “The Groom’s Still Waiting At The Altar”.

Apocalyptic visions borrowed directly from Revelations, one of Dylan’s favourite Bible books: the slaughter of innocents, burning cities and murdered nuns… and to complete the horror, he cannot find the light switch and has not seen Claudette since January. In itself, this is a run-of-the-mill grass may wither and flowers may fall scenario, contrasting world-shattering catastrophes with intimate suffering, but Dylan elevates the cliché.

The expressive power of the opening line Prayed in the ghetto with my face in the cement sets the tone for the dark, enigmatic content of the verses that will follow. A Hard Rain part 2, one may be tempted to think, after the second line (“Heard the last moan of a boxer, seen the massacre of the innocent”) – but stylistically, this song is more multiform. The love and talent for aphoristic points, as we will encounter more often in the highlights of the upcoming 80’s-songs, blossom here. Three of these pearls the poet places here, with an elegant choice of words (are there songs with words like “aloofness” or “snobbery” in the lyrics?) demonstrating the author’s eloquence.

The biblical tone suggests that Dylan is still in the middle of his evangelical phase, although earthly, ironic points are already being served. “Try to be pure at heart…” paraphrases Jesus’ Sermon on the Mount (“Blessed are the pure in heart; for they shall see God” – Mat. 5:8), but is banalised wittily: “…they arrest you for robbery”. The satirical Jewish poet Heinrich Heine (1797-1856), Dylans spiritual ancestor, may be proud of his successor.

The Bible is often quoted, by the interpreters of this song. The bridegroom-metaphor can be found on the last page, at the end of Revelation, though just a touch more metaphorically; the new Jerusalem is the bride, the Lamb’s fiancée, who is dressed up and awaiting the arrival of her groom, Jesus. And yes indeed, west of the Jordan, that can’t be misinterpreted, obviously. Remarkable, however, is that precisely this topographical hint has only been added in the later text version, the studio version from April ’81. The chorus of the primeval version, the version we know from the inspired live performances at the Warfield Theater in San Francisco, November 1980, has no Jordanian reference, sounds a lot more activist, missionary even, and suggests that a religious schism led to the love break:

Oh, set my affections on things above,
Let nothing stand in the way of that love,
Not even the Rock of Gibraltar! 
Wel, if you see her on Fannin’ Street, 
Tell her I still think she’s neat, 
And that the groom’s still waiting at the altar

Of course, those Warfield performances have historical value not only because of Dylan’s passion, and certainly not because of the primeval version of Groom, but most of all because of the swan song of the unforgettable Mike Bloomfield. Gifted and influential guitarist Bloomfield is a mid 60’s comrade in arms, to whom a large part of the impact of Highway 61 can be attributed.

His guest appearance on the sixth evening, November 15th, is dazzling. Bloomfield shines in “Like A Rolling Stone” and is called back on stage to join Groom an hour later by a clearly enraptured, remarkably talkative Dylan. An unprepared Bloomfield stumbles onto the stage when the band is already well underway, and once again conjures up the stars of heaven. Like more great artists, however, he is also troubled and immoderate. This evening he plays his last public notes – three months later Michael Bernard Bloomfield, 37 years old, is found dead in his car after an overdose of heroin.

A few weeks later Dylan picks up “The Groom’s Still Waiting At The Altar” in the studio. The Jordan addition is not the only change, then. Claudette originally hangs out on Fannin Street, a notorious street near the Bayou River in the red-light district of Shreveport, Louisiana, where, according to Lead Belly’s mother, a decent man doesn’t go:

My mama told me
"Women in Shreveport, son
Gonna be the death of you"

Lead Belly goes anyway, though, I go down on Fannin Street and I goes into the bellhouse.

In the final version, Dylan takes away the sharper edges – maybe she manages a brothel in Argentina, but Claudette might as well be a respectable housewife by now.

Further textual changes are less substantial, or an improvement. Locked into a time-zone, with a high-degree temperature is rewritten into Put your hand on my head, baby, do I have a temperature?, for example. Still, Dylan is not entirely satisfied, apparently. He rejects the song for Shot Of Love and relegates it to being a B-side (for the “Heart Of Mine” single). “It sounded okay,” says the master in the Biograph booklet, “but it wasn’t really the way I wanted to play it.” Much to his surprise, most DJs then mainly play that B-side. Subsequently, Groom is reinstated on the re-release of the CD – a unique manoeuvre in Dylan’s discography.

There are only a few tolerable covers, but none of them are invigorating; Tim Drummond’s iron, compelling bass stomp Dylan already did bring to the studio, and the colleagues follow. The one by Rod Stewart, who has been producing distinctive Dylan covers since the 1960s, is beautiful, but Stewart also initially leaves the recording behind. Following the song’s traditional fate, it is only used as a B-side for an unsuccessful single (“This”, 1995). In 2009 an alternative recording is released on the 4CD set Sessions 1971-1998.

Veteran Elkie Brooks’ version on the pleasantly entertaining, flopped album Electric Lady from 2005 is more attractive: a subterranean driving bass, ripping sax, and the whole echoes, oddly enough, Dylan’s “Thunder On The Mountain”. The Doors’ “Roadhouse Blues” on the same album is equally driven and equally satisfying, by the way. Brooks’ English accent providing the je-ne-sais-quoi and taking both songs far, far away from Fannin Street down to, say, Portobello Road or Savile Row – but who cares.

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Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

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Bob Dylan And Cowboy Jesus (Part ll): The Riddler

Part 1 of this series: Bob Dylan And The Cowboy Jesus

by Larry Fyffe

Like poet William Blake, singer/songwriter Bob Dylan sets up a personal mythology.

Featured in that mythology, which is based on legends of the Old American West, is a Jewish drifter who rides around the countryside on horseback, throwing apple seeds, playing a guitar, and singing songs about the degradation of the Promised Land, the end of idyllic Eden, and the death of the American Dream.

The mythology tells us that, in the beginning, the drifter, who goes by the alias ‘Jesus’, looks down from the heavens, and is disappointed at the darknees that he sees below – the name of his pony is ‘Forest’ because you cannot see him for the trees:

Upon four-legged forest clouds
The cowboy angel rides
With his candle lit into the sun
Though it's glow is waxed in black
All except when 'neath the trees of Eden
(Bob Dylan: Gates Of Eden)

https://youtu.be/hVSnu4zRrfY

In any event, ‘Cowboy Jesus’ as he’s called, descends to earth, and sings lots of songs that are expressed in parables and riddles – they are not that easy to understand.

Already mentioned is the following song:

The next day was hanging day, the sky was overcast and black
Big Jim lay covered up with a penknife in the back
And Rosemary on the gallows, she didn't even blink
The hanging judge was sober, he hadn't had a drink
The only person on the scene missing was the Jack Of Hearts
(Bob Dylan: Lily, Rosemary, And The Jack Of Hearts)

Rosemary sacrifices herself for the benefit of both Lily and the Jack Of Hearts – the Devil Jim gets what’s coming to him, and Lily has Cowboy Jesus, the ‘Jack Of Hearts’, all to herself when and if he returns to the Cabaret; apparently, it’s just tough luck for everybody else.

Another song already mentioned:

Hot chilli peppers in the blistering sun
Dust on my face and my cape
Me and Magdalena on the run
I think this time we shall escape
Sold my guitar to the baker's son
For a few crumbs, and a place to hide
But I can get another one
And I'll play for Magdalena as we ride
(Bob Dylan: Romance In Durango ~ Dylan/Levy)

In the above song another woman, Magdalena, is on the Cowboy’s side – he’s in trouble, but she’s there ready and willing to help the drifter escape.

In the song below, Cowboy Jesus, this time going by the name of ‘John Wesley Harding’, is said to be, as in the previous narratives, a really a nice guy who’s been falsely accused of wrongdoing:

It was down in Chaynee County
A time they talk about
With his lady by his side
He took a stand
And soon the situation there
Was all but straightened out
For he was never known
To hurt an honest man
(Bob Dylan: John Wesley Harding)

A modern day gun-carrying Cowboy “Joey” gets the same goody-good treatment by the singer/songwriter in the song lyrics below:

The hostages were trembling when they heard a man exclaim
"Let's blow this place to kingdom come, let Con Edison take the blame"
But Joey stepped up, and he raised his hand, and said, 
      "We're not those kind of men
It's peace and quiet we need to go back to work again"
(Bob Dylan: Joey ~ Dylan/Levy)

https://youtu.be/8yL832s0hJ0

The hyperbolic narratives depict an Old Wild West so decadent and lost that, at least relatively speaking, it is the outlaw who is the good guy, and the lawman, the bad guy!

Saith the Cowboy Jesus to Sheriff Nicodemis:

The wind bloweth where it listeth
And thou hearest the sound thereof
But canst not tell whence it cometh, and whither it goeth
So is every one that is born of the Spirit
(Book Of St. John 3:8)

“HI, ho, ‘Forest’, Away!”

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For Bob’s birthday we offer “Sheep in Wolf’s clothing” the album cover!

By Tony Attwood

When we come up with a new idea none of us has any idea whether we will get lots of replies and lots of interest or none at all.   This is especially so with notions like the Bob Dylan Showcase, and the concept of our creating an album of outtakes, and then asking our readers to design a cover.

But I think it is fair to say that all of us who write Untold Dylan are just knocked out by the enthusiasm and interest of everyone who reads this site.

Yet even though I am getting used to the fact that Untold Dylan readers are a really lively and creative group, I was unsure if we would get anyone to devise a front and back cover for “Sheep in Wolves Clothing”.

So Aaron agreed to put together his own covers.  But we’ve already had two other submissions.  There is no prize, no award, and unless Bob’s record company wants to give me a call to discuss the actual real-live release of “Sheep in Wolves’ Clothing” no actual album.  But certainly for Aaron and I, and from our readers who are taking part in this, it is fun.

So there is no competition, and there are no prizes, but if you want to design a cover for this invented album (which I have to say in my opinion is quite an improvement on “Down in the Groove”) please do create it, and send it to Tony@schools.co.uk

Aaron’s front and back covers

   

Babette’s front and back cover

Rick Hager’s covers were published earlier – they are here.

Here’s the track listing with links to each song…

Meanwhile if you are interested in artwork I am sure you will enjoy our series on the art work on Bob’s album covers.  Indeed if you have never seen it plesae do spend a few moments with the article on your favourite album…  In virtually every case you will find pictures you have never seen before.

Untold Dylan: who we are what we do

Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

We welcome articles, contributions and ideas from all our readers.  Sadly no one gets paid, but if you are published here, your work will be read by a fairly large number of people across the world, ranging from fans to academics who teach English literature.  If you have an idea, or a finished piece send it as a Word file to Tony@schools.co.uk with a note saying that it is for publication on Untold Dylan.

We also have a very lively discussion group “Untold Dylan” on Facebook with around 5500 active members. Just type the phrase “Untold Dylan” in, on your Facebook page or follow this link 

You’ll find some notes about our latest posts arranged by themes and subjects on the home page of this site.  You can also see details of our main sections on this site at the top of this page under the picture.  Not every index is complete but I do my best.

But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

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Caribbean Wind part 3 Verses 5 and 6

by Paul Robert Thomas

Caribbean Wind part 1 – verses 1 and 2

Caribbean Wind: part 2. Verses 3 and 4

  • Verse 5 

Line 1; Atlantic City by the cold gray sea. Dylan qualifies the location as by the cold grey sea, which is the Atlantic Ocean. Hence he identifies the location as being Atlantic City, New Jersey, the home of the bankrupt souls of the casino’s bright lights and busted dreams (bearing in mind Dylan’s religious standpoint at that time). In fact, on 6/10/78, Dylan had been playing concerts just up the freeway from Atlantic City in Philadelphia, and it is possible that he drove the few hundred miles to Atlantic City around 6/10/78, which would roughly correlate to the date of 16/12/78 identified by Paul Williams as being when he played the show at the Theatre of Divine Comedy in Hollywood, Florida. (A recent newspaper article here states that Atlantic City has recently been voted as ‘The world’s most hostile city’(23)). 

Line 2; Hear a voice crying ‘daddy’, I always think it’s for me. This is the line that pulls on everyone’s heartstrings and it is presumed to refer to Dylan missing his estranged children. In the original 31/3/81 version the line reads, I hear her voice crying ‘daddy’ and look that way. Who is she? His only daughter is Anna from Sara’s previous marriage, so is this she, the she who is the Rose of Sharon, or the dark skinned and brown one? She used to call me sweet daddy when I was only a child (Sweetheart Like You from Infidels). 

Line 3; But it’s only the silence in the buttermilk hills that call. I think that he is referring to the hills of Hollywood, that other place of corrupt souls, of false living; You’re going to Sodom and Gomorrah (Jokerman, Infidels), where the promise of fortune and fame calls (as in Just Like Tom Thumbs Blues), to many. Silence in Scripture is defined as; ‘An entire ruin or destruction’ (Isaiah 15:1 & Jerimiah 8:1(2)), and as; ‘Death and the grave’ (Psalms 94:17 & 115:17(2)), but the promise of fortune and fame is a magnet to many, as it was for Dylan, who now recognizes it to be an ‘empty wind’. 

Line 4; Every new messenger bringing evil report. The evil report that they bring is that the world is going to be destroyed, as prophesied in the Book of Revelation, in the great final battle between good and evil at Armageddon, and is the same message that Dylan himself has been preaching for some time – that our days are numbered unless we repent and return to God for otherwise we will surely die, not in the flood, but by fire next time. ‘Even horsemen that did bring up the evil report upon the land, died by the plague before the Lord’ (Numbers 14:37). 

Line 5; ‘bout armies on the march and time that is short. The armies of good and evil marching towards Armageddon for that great final battle when the devil shall be finally defeated and Christ will set up His Kingdom for 1,000 years. For many, their time is indeed short! ‘And the armies which were in heaven followed Him’; ‘I saw the beast, and the kings of the earth, and their armies, gathered together to make war against Him’ (Revelation 19:14&19); ‘For the devil is come down to you, he knoweth that he hath but a short time’ (Revelation 12:12); ‘The battle of that great day of God Almighty’ (Revelation 16:14). ‘Armageddon’ (Revelation 16:16). 

Line 6; And famines and earthquakes and train wrecks and the tearin’ down of the wall. Does Dylan view these almost everyday occurrences, as signs that Armageddon is near? ‘For nation shall rise against nation and kingdom against kingdom, and there shall be famines, and pestilence’s, and earthquakes’ (Matthew 24:7). Are you ready for Armageddon, are you ready for the day of the Lord? (Are You Ready from Saved). Was Dylan’s wall, his deep unquestionable faith in Christianity, torn down? Was his slow train derailed? ‘A very memorable earthquake was that at the time of the crucifixion of Jesus Christ’ (Matthew 27:51); ‘An extraordinary and unexpected alteration in the state of affairs, civil or ecclesiastical, is represented by a great earthquake’ (Revelation 6:12(2)). Revelation 21:12-27 describes the wall, viz. Christianity, thus; ‘And the wall of the city had 12 foundations, and in them the names of the 12 apostles of the Lamb (Jesus)’ (Revelation 21:14). Drought and starvation, packaging of the soul, persecution, execution, governments out of control, you can see the writing on the wall, inviting trouble (Trouble, Shot of Love). 

  • Verse 6 

Line 1; Did you ever have a dream that you couldn’t explain? Dylan told us that he wrote Caribbean Wind after waking up from a strange dream in the hot sun. ‘I have dreamed a dream and my spirit was troubled to know the dream’ (Daniel 2:3). ‘In Scripture God frequently revealed His will in dreams’(2). Caribbean Wind would thus appear to be a song about a dream of Dylan’s that he has tried to put into song, but a song which nevertheless underwent four rewrites and still, according to Dylan, he wasn’t sure if he’d got it right! 

Line 2; Did you ever meet your accusers face to face in the rain? Who are Dylan’s accusers? His critics or/and those who were violently opposed to his conversion to Christianity? Perhaps a clue can be found in the audience’s open hostility to his gospel shows which appear to have had a lasting effect upon Dylan. Dylan spoke of this hostility in his 1985 Biograph interview; “We’d play the so-called colleges, where my so-called fans were. And all hell would break loose. ‘Take off that dress’, and ‘we want rock and roll’, lots of other things I don’t even want to repeat, just really filthy mouth stuff”. Dylan was referring to the two shows he had played at Tempe, Arizona, on 25 & 26/11/79 to primary students of the local university who were not at all tolerant to his new stance. ‘The first night the audience refused to sit still, shouting between songs….and as the second half progressed, the heckling started up again….if the first night in Tempe had been an unhappy experience for Dylan, matters only grew worse with the second show, when he met the most hostile audience of this entire tour. Indeed the barracking 1966 fans pale in comparison to the uniform hostility he met in Tempe….The first night in Tempe, he had not played a second encore, the second night, for the only time on the tour, he refused to play any encore at all(5)’. In fact, he would talk at length about this hostile reaction that he received at Tempe during his filmed 1980 Massey Hall, Toronto concert. 

‘Before that he which is accused have the accusers face to face’ (Acts 25:16);…‘The power of his Christ, for the accuser of our brethren is cast down, which accused them before our God day and night. And they overcame him by the blood of the Lamb’ (Revelation 12: 10 & 11). 

Line 3; She had chrome brown eyes that I won’t forget as long as she’s gone (The Lyrics 1962-1985 book(6) wrongly transcribes chrome as lone). This reminds me somewhat of Sad Eyed Lady of the Lowlands from Blonde on Blonde; with her sheet metal memory and mercury mouth, which is presumed to be a song about Sara, who incidentally does have large brown eyes. If her chrome brown eyes are all that he remembers of her, is he recalling a statue? In an earlier song, Seven Days(22), her eyes he also couldn’t forget; I ain’t forgotten her eyes. In the later Jokerman on Infidels; While the eyes of the idol with the iron head are glowing – This seemingly does refer to a statue. 

Line 4; I see the screws breaking loose, see the devil pounding on tin. He appears to see the structure in which he believes, perhaps either The Church, or the Christian Vineyard Fellowship, falling apart and the devil is on the roof trying to break in, or equally, his faith or resolve is weakening and he knows that the devil, that is in the form of sin, will invade his being. Yonder Comes Sin! 

Line 5; I see a house in the country being torn apart from within. Jesus said; ‘Every house divided against itself shall not stand’ (Matthew 12:25). If the country is the USA, then the house could be Christianity. If the country is Israel, then he could be referring to The House of Israel/The House of Judah, Judaism. In Scripture, House is defined as; ‘The House of God, also as; ‘The body, as the dwelling place of the soul of man’(2). 

Line 6; I can hear my ancestors calling from the land far beyond. This is the last and most revealing line as it depicts Dylan turning back to the religion of his forefathers, Judaism. Is The land far beyond, Israel or Heaven? In Every Grain of Sand Dylan hears his religious ancestors as; I hear the ancient footsteps like the motion of the sea. In Caribbean Wind he states; My ancestors, that is, his Jewish/Hebrew ancestors, and in fact Abraham, the first Jew, was from the land far beyond, from Ur (now in present day Iraq). In this last line Dylan reveals his need to return to Judaism. In 1982 he was reported to be staying and studying with a Jewish religious sect called the Lubavitcher’s, and later he appeared on Chabad TV (in 1986, 1989 & 1990) drumming up charitable donations for the Lubavitcher’s wearing a kippur or yarmulke. In September 1982 he was photographed at the bar-mitzvah of one of his sons in Jerusalem wearing a yarmulke. There are no other reports of further contact between Dylan and the Christian Church, although, unquestionably, Dylan’s meeting with Jesus Christ indelibly left His mark upon him. ‘Dylan started to remove his Christian Born Again mask beginning at the Stanley Theatre in Pittsburgh on 16/5/80. After playing 13 religious songs, he started to play the first eight bars of Lay Lady Lay and then stopped and told the audience, “Umh-umb-umh, not tonight” and then played In The Garden!’ (Note that this was before his first performance of Caribbean Wind in October 1980). ‘It wasn’t till 9/11/80 at San Francisco Fox Warfield he played nonreligious songs and then burst into Like a Rolling Stone and from there on his ‘born again’ songs faded more and more into the background’(5). 

Paul Esmond of The Christian Vineyard Fellowship had this to say about their recent defector to Judaism; “I don’t think he ever left his Jewish roots. I think he is one of those fortunate ones who realize that Judaism and Christianity can work very well together, because Christ is just. And so he doesn’t have any problems about putting on a yarmulke and going to a bar-mitzvah because he can respect that”(5). 

The following 1983 interview, given during his recording of the album, Infidels, reveals the extent of Dylan’s knowledge of his Judaic roots and the calling of his ancestors:- “My so-called roots are in Egypt. They went down there with Joseph, and they came back out with Moses, you know, the guy that killed the Egyptian, married an Ethiopian girl and brought the law down from the mountain. The same Moses whose staff turned into a serpent. The same person who killed 30,000 Hebrews for getting down, stripping off their clothes and dancing around a golden calf. These are my roots.

“Jacob had four wives and 13 children, who fathered 13 children, who fathered an entire nation. Those are my roots too. Gideon, with a small army, defeating an army of thousands. Deborah, the prophetess. Ester the queen and many Canaanite women. Reuben slipping into his father’s bed when his father wasn’t there. These are my roots. Delilah tempting Samson, killing him softly with her song. The mighty King David was an outlaw before he was a king, you know. He had to hide in caves and get his meals at back doors. The wonderful King Saul had a warrant out on him – a “no-knock” search warrant. They wanted to cut his head off. John the Baptist could tell you more about it.

“Roots man – we’re talking about Jewish roots, you want to know more? Check up on Elijah the prophet. He could make rain. Isaiah the prophet, even Jeremiah, see if their brethren didn’t want to bust their brains for telling it right like it is, yeah – these are my roots I suppose”(24).

Rabbi Kasriel Kastel, a member and organizer of the Brooklyn Lubavitch Centre, where Dylan apparently ‘studied’ in 1983, had this to say about their returnee; “He’s been going in and out of a lot of things, trying to find himself. And we have been just making ourselves available. As far as we are concerned, he was a confused Jew. We feel he’s coming back”(5). 

Other reviews of Caribbean Wind on this site

Untold Dylan: who we are what we do

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We welcome articles, contributions and ideas from all our readers.  Sadly no one gets paid, but if you are published here, your work will be read by a fairly large number of people across the world, ranging from fans to academics who teach English literature.  If you have an idea, or a finished piece send it as a Word file to Tony@schools.co.uk with a note saying that it is for publication on Untold Dylan.

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But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

 

 

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Sheep in Wolves’ Clothing album cover – and reviews of other album artwork

By Tony Attwood

Following our completion of the invented “Sheep in Wolves’ Clothing” album which could have been issued instead of Down in the Groove, we invited anyone interested to come up with a new cover for the album invented by Aaron.

And we have had our first submission from Rick Hager…

Rick Hager is a Dylan fan (and co-founder of the old “Look Back” magazine in 1984, now residing in Manasquan, NJ

Here’s the track listing with links to each song…

We’re still open to anyone reader who would like to contribute a cover for the album.  Unfortunately no one gets paid for doing anything on this site, but we do know that just occasionally quite senior people in the world of Dylan do take a peek at what we get up to.

Meanwhile if you are interested in artwork I am sure you will enjoy our series on the art work on Bob’s album covers.  Indeed if you have never seen it plesae do spend a few moments with the article on your favourite album…

Untold Dylan: who we are what we do

Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

We welcome articles, contributions and ideas from all our readers.  Sadly no one gets paid, but if you are published here, your work will be read by a fairly large number of people across the world, ranging from fans to academics who teach English literature.  If you have an idea, or a finished piece send it as a Word file to Tony@schools.co.uk with a note saying that it is for publication on Untold Dylan.

We also have a very lively discussion group “Untold Dylan” on Facebook with around 5500 active members. Just type the phrase “Untold Dylan” in, on your Facebook page or follow this link 

You’ll find some notes about our latest posts arranged by themes and subjects on the home page of this site.  You can also see details of our main sections on this site at the top of this page under the picture.  Not every index is complete but I do my best.

But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

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Bob Dylan And The Cowboy Jesus

by Larry Fyffe

A theme expressed in the song lyrics of Bob Dylan, given no one can escape from the certainty of death, at least an individual, or even a group of people, as in the movie ‘The Magnificient Seven’, can escape from a life of slavery.

It’s a theme drawn from songs of old as in the lyrics below:

Oppressed so hard they could not stand
Let my people go
Go down, Moses
Way down in Egypt's land
Tell old Pharoah
To let my people go
(Paul Robeson: Go Down Moses ~ traditional)

The theme which in turn is taken from the Holy Bible:

And afterward Moses and Aaron went in
And told the Pharaoh
Thus saith the Lord God of Israel
"Let my people go
That they may hold a feast unto in the wilderness"
(Exodus 5:I)

A theme repeated in pre-American Civil War America in a spiritual sung by black slaves who escape to Canada:

No more auction block for me
No more, no more
No more auction block for me
Many thousands gone
(No More Auction Block~traditional)

The theme, along with the tune adapted somewhat from the song above, repeated in the Civil Rights era of America; there be the ‘rhyme twist’ ~ ‘me’/’me’; ~’sea’/’free’/’see’:

How many years can a mountain exist
Before it is washed to the sea?
How many years must some people exist
Before they're allowed to be free?
And how many times can a man turn his head
And pretend that he just doesn't see?
(Peter, Paul, and Mary: Blowing In The Wind ~ Bob Dylan)

The claimed ‘murder most foul’ of Christ on the cross is twisted too by some biblical interpreters – Jesus escapes.

Says He:

Greater love hath no man than this
That a man lay down his life for a friend
(Book Of St. John 15:13)

Apparently a Libyan takes the place of Jesus, and unbeknownst to Roman guards, does just that – he gives up his life for a friend:

And they compel one Simon a Cyrenian
Who passed by, coming out of the country
The father of Alexander and Rufus, to bear His cross
(Book Of St. Mark 15: 21)

What supposedly happens is that Jesus and the Cyrenian change identities, a conspiracy theory that’s hard to resist by any writer of ‘noir’ tales:

There is nothing you can do or say To make me think I’m wrong Well I’m going off to Libya There’s a guy I gotta see He’s been living there three years now In an oill refinery (Bob Dylan: Got My Mind Made Up)

(Editor’s note, the video below is the only one I can find for this song, but it doesn’t appear to work in all countries – if you can find an alternative please write in below and I’ll add it)

The idea has been floated before – below, Jesus, ‘the drifter’, gets away!:

"Oh, stop that cursed jury"
Cried the attendant to the nurse
"The trial was bad enough
But this is ten times worse"
Just then a bolt of lightning
Struck the courthouse out of shape
And while everybody knelt to pray
The drifter did escape
(Bob Dylan:The Drifter's Escape)

Indeed, it’s all there in the Holy Bible – Christ is not dead after He’s supposedly crucified; He appears to Mary Magdalene as alive as you or me:

Jesus saith unto her, "Why weepest thou; whom seekest thou?"
She supposing him to be the gardener, saith unto him
"Sir, if thou have borne Him hence, tell me where thou hast laid Him
And I will take Him away"
Jesus saith unto her, "Mary"; she turned herself, and saith unto Him
"Rabboni", which is to say, "Master"
(Book of St. John 20: 15, 16)

A conspiracy theory that is kept alive in the following song lyrics:

As I walked out in the mystic garden
On a hot summer day, on a hot summer lawn
"Excuse me, ma'am, I beg your pardon
There's no one here, the gardener's gone"
(Bob Dylan: Ain't Talking)

https://youtu.be/Hx6fHd99SxA

It’s a story that won’t die, and is repeated somewhat differently – given a cowboy western flavour – in the song lyrics below:

Hot chili peppers in the blistering sun
Dust on my face and my cape
Me and Magdalena on the run
I think this time we shall escape
(Bob Dylan: Romance In Durango)

https://youtu.be/-NBWMK0CV0Y

Twisted around is another tale of a cowboy’s escape:

The next day was hanging day, the sky was overcast and black
Big Jim lay covered up, killed by a penknife in the back
And Rosemary on the gallows, she didn't even blink
The hanging judge was sober, he hadn't had a drink
The only person on the scene missing was the Jack Of Hearts
(Bob Dylan: Lily, Rosemary, And The Jack Of Hearts)

Untold Dylan: who we are what we do

Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

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But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

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Do Right To Me Baby (Do Unto Others) (Just pick up the cross and walk)

by Jochen Markhorst

Waylaid, the past participle of to waylay, is a beautiful, archaic and striking word in the otherwise rather poor lyrics to “Do Right To Me Baby”. In this century the use of it appears more often than in the centuries since 1513, since the first registered use of waylay, but the synonym to ambush is and remains much more common.

Dylan’s country hero George Jones mentions the word once (in 1963, in “Big Harlan Taylor”), at Shakespeare it can only be found twice (in Twelfth Night and in Henry IV) and also Dylan only uses the word twice. Both times in 1978, by the way: not only in this song but also in the ambitious “No Time To Think” (which he actually writes in December ’77). And that’s not the only similarity between both songs.

Stylistically they could not be more different, of course. “No Time To Think” (from Street Legal) is an explosion of eloquence, of bizarre rhymes, rhythmic masterpieces and virtuoso language. “Do Right To Me Baby” is a thin, monosyllabic, somewhat droning, straightforward text.  Which is illustrated by the scoreboard statistics as well: No Time has 288 unique words, Do Right only 80 – less than an average nursery rhyme. Of course, quantity doesn’t mean everything, but it does say something. At the very least, the most word-rich pop poet shows himself here, in a lyric of 323 words, from a remarkably gruff side.

But, strangely enough, both songs seem to be in line with each other in terms of content. In “No Time To Think” the poet also slaloms past universal, eternal vices, sins and temptations that have threatened the salvation of the human soul since the beginning of time. To this end, he stamps, verse after verse, masterfully poetic, pseudo-clear-cut Big Words (“Memory, ecstasy, tyranny, hypocrisy”) on mysterious imagery, symbolically loaded (“Mercury rules you and destiny fools you / Like the plague, with a dangerous wink”). It is dense, intellectually challenging, through-composed poetry, which a few months later, with “Do Right To Me, Baby”, he seems to rewrite into a child-friendly dummy version. By loyalty, dear children, Uncle Bob means “Don’t wanna cheat nobody, don’t wanna be cheated”, gravity is a difficult word for “Don’t wanna amuse nobody, don’t wanna be amused”, tenderness is the horror we try to avoid when we say, “Don’t wanna touch nobody, don’t wanna be touched”. And like this, all those don’ts seem to connect with Big Words and verse fragments from No Time, with the reflections the poet Dylan apparently has on his mind, these months.

The man Dylan is at a much-discussed crossroads these months. After his painful divorce, the bard stumbles into the Vineyard Christian Fellowship Church with the help of friend Mary Alice Artes, converts to Christian and a few months later astounds the world with the beautiful but frighteningly evangelical record Slow Train Coming. Dylan himself can pinpoint the exact turning point. On 17 November 1978, towards the end of the long, exhausting tour of 1978 (ten months, 114 concerts in ten countries) Dylan is in San Diego and someone from the audience throws a silver cross on stage.

Now usually I don’t pick things up in front of the stage. Once in a while I do, but sometimes, most times, I don’t. But I looked down at that cross. I said, ‘I gotta pick that up.’ I picked up that cross and I put it in my pocket. It was a silver cross, I think maybe about so high. And I put it … brought it backstage with me. And I brought it with me to the next town, which was off in Arizona, Phoenix. Anyway, when I got back there I was feeling even worse than I’d felt when I was in San Diego. And I said, ‘Well I really need something tonight.’ I didn’t know what it was, I was using all kinds of things, and I said, ‘I need something tonight that I never really had before.’ And I looked in my pocket and I had this cross that someone threw before when I was in San Diego.

And even more dramatic is his testimony that, lonely and alone in a hotel room, he felt the Hand of Jesus.

In these days he writes the first two songs that will appear on Slow Train Coming: “Slow Train” and “Do Right To Me Baby”. “Slow Train” is hardly evangelical and fits in better with Street Legal in both style and content, but “Do Right To Me Baby” is Dylan’s first, real attempt to proclaim the Good News, the prelude to that startling conversion.

This particular Glad Tiding is taken from Matthew, chapter 7, verse 12: “Therefore all things whatsoever ye would that men should do to you, do ye even so to them”. So the title and the chorus are gospel in the true sense of the word: “good message”.

However, it is the only biblical adaptation in the song. All those don’ts from the verses still seem (partly) in line with the commandments, rules of conduct and the guidelines from the New Testament Gospels, but the tone is really completely wrong. The opening line for example; don’t wanna judge nobody, don’t wanna be judged. It is true, Jesus says “Judge not, that ye be not judged” (Matthew 7:1), but in the verses that follow he explains what he means: that he abhors hypocrisy and calls to a self-critical gaze, illustrated by the metaphor of the mote in thy brother’s eye and the beam in your own eye.

The narrator in Dylan’s song strikes the tone of the bored, annoyed adolescent who wants to put an end to his mother’s sermon: “I don’t care enough to have an opinion, and moreover, I don’t want to be judged.” That is quite contrary to what the same New Testament tells us, not to say heretical – you most certainly will be judged, whether you like it or not. If not immediately after your death, then at the latest on Judgement Day. In Matthew alone it is four times announced; ye shall be judged in the day of judgement.

The narrator maintains this bored, annoyed tone in all the verses; it is mainly a list of activities with which he or she does not want to be bothered. Most of them belong to the domain of ordinary, everyday decency. Don’t hurt, don’t shoot, don’t cheat and don’t betray. Some are hardly to be taken seriously (“I don’t want to be amused”?), others border on absurdism (“I don’t want to marry someone who’s already married” – yes, we have laws against that, for a while now).

Dylan writes the text before attending pastor Gulliksen’s Bible lessons, that much seems clear.

Nevertheless, the song has great value for every Dylan fan. First of all for music historical reasons: it is the first song of the evangelical Dylan, the first Christian revelation Dylan introduces us to. He fumbles it, hardly noticeable, somewhere into the end of the setlist at the very last concert of that 1978 tour, at the Hollywood Sportatorium, near Fort Lauderdale, Florida, on December 16, 1978. Dylan is quite elaborate, if not loquacious that night, joking and fooling around with the musicians, but “Do Right To Me Baby”, a world premiere after all, passes without any comment, is not even announced or looked back on.

And secondly, because of the music. The richness of melody and rhythm changes, the subtleties and loving interpretation at all, and the beautiful ebb and flow of tension building and de-stressing are probably largely due to producer Jerry Wexler and session guitarist Mark Knopfler, as we may deduce from that first live introduction, well before both greats got involved. This embryonic primeval version is still set up as a thumping, funky and sweaty rocker. In the recording studio in Alabama, Wexler and Knopfler cut out the diamond that shines on Slow Train Coming. Cut like a 10cc or Stealer’s Wheel pop diamond, but with even more facets; a country guitar plucks underneath the fluttering, funky bass, pianist Barry Beckett provides the soul and drummer Pick Withers performs the same paradoxical trick he just demonstrated on Dire Straits’ first record: playing tight and laid-back at the same time.

It elevates “Do Right To Me Baby”, in spite of its lyrics, to one of the many highlights of one of Dylan’s most beautiful albums. That’s what the master himself seems to think too; later live performances are grafted onto the studio version (and sometimes surpass that, like the one at the Warfield Theatre in San Francisco, November ’79).

As with almost all songs from Dylan’s Christian catalogue, colleagues are a bit hesitant; the song is not covered much, not even in gospel circles. Tim O’Brien’s bluegrass is usually nice, sometimes very successful (“Tombstone Blues”, for instance), but here it’s no more than amusing (on Remember Me, with sister Mollie O’Brien, 1992).

Very nice is the Norwegian Tina Lie with a heavy blues and a fine band (on Free Enough To Fall, 2009).

The nicest, catchiest cover, the one by Clinton Collins & The Creekboys (Junebug, 2009), isn’t sky-high either, but it’s nice, acoustic, folky bluegrass country – Collins turns it into pure Americana and that does fit, one could say – if one were allowed to judge, that is.

Clinton Collins & The Creekboys

Untold Dylan: who we are what we do

Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

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But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

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Another Bob Dylan song: “Listen Robert Moses”

By Aaron Gailbraith and Tony Attwood

Last year, we were fascinated when a lyric sheet for “Listen, Robert Moses,” credited to Bob Dylan, popped up on the internet.

And yes it seems “Listen Robert Moses” is another Bob Dylan song – in this case it seems it was originally sung to the tune of Listen Mr Bilbo.

Robert Moses was an impresario who resisted the changes that were happening in America during the early days of Dylan’s career, and many websites contain suggestions that there was a certain racism behind his bookings policy, as well as a dislike of modern trends in music, with him famously refusing to book The Beatles.

In an article in gothamist.com there is confirmation that Dylan may have written these lyrics in protest against his activities.   They admit The New York Public Library has no record of any recording of the song but it’s entirely possible Dylan wrote the lyrics and never actually sang it—he was writing a hell of a lot of songs during that time period, many of which were getting sent around to other songwriters.

But the website Mental Floss suggests that Bob wrote the song with activist Jane Jacobs, so it is a possibility and that is good enough for us to say, if you fancy writing some music to this piece, we will count it as a possible Dylan song, and add it to our files.

This is Tony’s transcription of the lyrics.  Tony is however notoriously inaccurate so we’ve also included a copy of the original beneath the transcription, in case you fancy working from that instead.

Either way, if you make a recording just send it to Tony@schools.co.uk with a note saying saying who you are and how you want your name written when we publish your music and these lyrics of Dylan (probably).

Listen Robert Moses, listen if you can,
It's all about our neighbourhood that you're trying to condemn
We aren't going to sit back and see our homes torn down
So take your superhighway and keep it out of town.

We won't be moved Buddy we won't be moved
We're fighting for our rights and we won't be moved
We're fighting for our rights from our heads to our shoes
We're fighting for our homes and we aren't going to lose

For twenty long years there's been a shadow hanging round
That anyday the bulldozers will throw our houses down
We're going to lift the shadow once and all for good
We don't want a superhighway we want a neighbourhood

Some of us are young and some of us are old
But none of us like to be thrown out in the cold
Are we squatters in the city that we are living in?
Will we stand up for our rights or be scattering the wind?

Up and down Mulberry, Delancy Street and Spring
Chrystie and Canal Streets, you hear our voices ring
From Elizabeth to Thompson, to Varrick Street and Broome
We're trying to save our streets from that superhighway doom

Too many other people have been driven from their doors
To make room for some highway or else some fancy stores
They've been forced to leave their homes and all their roots behind
And dwell in housing projects, the reservation kind

It's time to make a stand, it's time to try and save
This ere neighbourhood of 'curs for it lands down in the grave
So hold up your banners and raise tem to the wind
We'll stand here and fight, and fight until we win.

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Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

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But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

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Caribbean Wind: part 2. Verses 3/4

Caribbean Wind part 1 – verses 1 and 2

by Paul Robert Thomas

Verse 3 

Line 1; Sea breeze blowin’, there’s a hell-hound loose. If the Caribbean Wind symbolizes the breath of God then the sea breeze of this verse is different and denotes inner conflict within Dylan’s soul. This hell hound is a hound from hell, from the Devil or Satan, and conforms with the medieval Christian tradition of hell being, ‘The place of the Devil’, although traditional Hebraic belief has hell as being ‘the place of the dead’. Dylan’s line is drawn from Revelation 13:1; ‘And I stood upon the sand of the sea, and saw a beast rise up out of the sea’. ‘By this ‘beast which rises up out of the sea’, almost all interpreters understand it as being Antichrist who comes out of the ‘sea of life’, that is in the midst of the human race which is agitated like a sea’(17).

A hound was/is of course traditionally used for tracking persons; Even the bloodhounds of London couldn’t find you today (Something’s Burning Baby from Empire Burlesque), and this same song mentions Mexico, the chorus of Caribbean Wind also mentions Mexico and has Dylan had good or bad experiences in Mexico? Certainly whilst staying in Durango for the filming of Pat Garratt & Billy The Kid it was reported that he had some major arguments with his wife Sara there and that she left him and returned home with the children because of this friction between them. In this line does Dylan feel the Devil starting to come after him again after these few years of Christian sin-free living? Does he begin to feel temptation and sin creeping through his walls? Yonder Comes Sin he was to write around the same time! 

Line 2; Redeemed men who have escaped from the noose. (Redeemed is wrongly transcribed as Arabian in The Lyrics 1962-1985 book(6)). Redeem means ‘to save from damnation or from the consequences of sin’(10). Again this line is directly drawn from Scripture; ‘Christ has redeemed us for it is written, ‘Cursed is everyone that hangeth on a tree’ (Galatians 3:13). Wasn’t Dylan surely redeemed by finding Jesus? He told us quite vehemently that I’ve been saved (Saved). 

Line 3; Preaching faith and salvation, waiting for the night to arrive. Does this refer to those false messiahs/false prophets, perhaps to the false doctrine of the Vineyard Fellowship, perhaps even to Dylan himself?

Is Dylan referring to his own preaching and sermonizing from the stage in 1979 and 1980? The night in Scripture, ‘is a time of ignorance and affliction’(2). Or perhaps he’s referring to those times, particularly in 1965 & 1966, when he was held by some to be some kind of Messiah? Is he saying that he was wrong in allowing himself to be played as a pawn? Did the night ever rise for him?

Certainly by the time of writing The Groom’s Still Waiting At The Altar; The curtain was rising on a New Age, and that New Age saw Dylan produce albums which were certainly less overtly Christian. Did he learn his lesson and stop preaching ‘The Word’? There is no doubt that Dylan does to this very day harbour Christian beliefs, (certainly, inasmuch as the message of the Book of the Revelation is concerned) and he continually performs ‘Christian’ songs in his setlists, although actually they are not so much ‘Christian’ songs as specific songs about his hero, Jesus Christ! 

Line 4; He was well connected but her heart was a snare. Cause my line’s been connected and I can ring it again and again (Bob Dylan(17)). If the He is Jesus Christ, then of course He was well connected to God. Dylan also could be said to have been well connected, as perhaps the above song lines reveal he certainly felt he was, but who is the female whose heart was a snare? Is it the woman, or one of the women, who introduced him to The Way, to Jesus Christ? Maybe Helena Springs with whom it appears he had a falling out with in the winter of 1980?

The word heart in Scripture is used ‘as the seat of life or strength, hence it means mind, soul, spirit, or ones entire emotional nature and understanding. It is also used as the centre or inner party of a thing’(2), or is this she the same she as appears in Seven Days viz. the Christian Church, which refers to that Christian dogma (incorrectly) fed to Dylan by the Christian Vineyard Fellowship? The heart of Israel, the daughter of Zion, is Jerusalem. Is Dylan referring to his Jewish ex-wife, Sara, who he also apparently criticized in Precious Angel for; Telling him about Buddha, you were telling him about Mohammed in the same breath. You never one time mentioned the Man who came and died a criminals death? 

Line 5; And she had left him to die in there. Farida Mcfree describes the effect that the battle with Sara had on Dylan; “He was very down. Don’t forget, he was suffering when I met him. He was in a bad way. I brought him back to life. He was practically dead….this guy was shot emotionally….”(5) Dylan was certainly in an emotional crisis as a result of the divorce battle and with the battle(s) over the custody of the children. And it was Sara who had left Dylan and not the other way around! 

Line 6; He was going down slow, just barely staying alive. I was going down for the last time, but by His mercy I’ve been saved (Saved). ‘Save me oh God, for the waters are come into my soul, I sink in deep mire, I am come into deep waters, where the floods overflowed me’ (Psalms 69:1 & 2). In Scripture, alive, also means being ‘spiritually alive’(2). Dried the tears up from my dreams and pulled me from the hole (The Wedding Song, Planet Waves). ‘Going down into the pit’ (Job 33:24). ‘Freed me from the pit, full of emptiness and wrath and the fire that burns in it. From the depths do I invoke them, O Eternal, Our Lord, Hearken to my cry’ (Psalms 1:30). 

  • Verse 4 

Line 1; The cry of the Peacock, flies buzz my head. A Peacock is also a synonym for a vain man, and flies are attracted to decaying flesh, perhaps to his decaying head, or brain?

A pelican is used as a symbol for the Messiah, as it pecks at its flesh to feed its young. Gonna build a bird’s nest in your hair (Dead Man, Dead Man. Shot of Love). Why use a bird symbol? In fact it is a sign of the coming of the Messiah. ‘The Jewish mystics talked of song. They talked of the Messiah’s home being ‘from that place called ‘The Bird’s Nest’ (this bird is the ‘Shekhinah’). ‘The time of His Coming would be the time of light shining from the west unto the east. The star would wage war against the children of darkness with the weapon of illumination’(19); Bird fly high by the light of the moon (Jokerman, Infidels). ‘When the Messiah weeps for the world, the Holy One, blessed be He, beckons to the Bird, which then enters its nest and comes to The Messiah, and flirts about, uttering strange cries.

Then from the Holy Throne, the Bird’s Nest and The Messiah are summoned three times, and both ascend into the heavenly places. And the Holy One, blessed be He, swears to them to destroy the wicked kingdom by the hand of The Messiah, to avenge Israel, and to give her all the good things which He has promised her. Then the bird returns to her place. The Messiah, however, is hidden again in the same place as before’(20). The following is an early example of Dylan’s understanding of Kabbalah as demonstrated in his use of the above references in Sign on the Cross; The bird is here and you might want to enter it, but, of course, the door might be closed. 

Line 2; Ceiling fan broken, there’s heat in my bed. There is nothing to cool him from above, That could ease you and cool you and cease the pain, (Tombstone Blues, Highway 61 Revisited). Nothing to cool him down from the heat of the flames of the furnace of the coming fire; It won’t be water but by fire next time (God Knows, Under The Red Sky), and his dreams are of the fire of destruction of annihilation of Armageddon; The soles of my feet, I swear they’re burning (The Wicked Messenger, JWH). ‘If I make my bed in hell’ (Psalms 139:8). 

Line 3; Street band playing ‘Nearer my God to thee’. One presumes that this band is playing outside of Dylan’s window, or his conscious mind. Could he also be vaguely referring to Bruce Springsteen’s band, The E Street Band? ‘Springsteen had delayed his first major European tour in Spring 1981 and ended up leaving England less than 3 weeks before the Dylan shows, thus making his much-hyped 1981 tour a fresh experience to contrast with Dylan’s considerably more demanding show; ‘No one else does this show, not Bruce Springsteen or anyone’ (Dylan, 1981(5)).

Two members of the E Street Band would appear later on Dylan’s album, Empire Burlesque. Springsteen was held by many to be ‘The New Dylan’ and Dylan makes his apparent contempt for Springsteen known during the introductory rap on the video Hard To Handle when he belches into the microphone after mentioning Springsteen’s name as being a possible hero for those in the audience, and then Dylan tells us that he doesn’t feel anything for none of those people and he informs us that his ‘hero is Jesus Christ who rose from the dead’, then Dylan’s band start the intro. to the song In the Garden, a song, incidentally, that Dylan still performs to this day in concert, perhaps as much to show man’s inability to realize and recognize those that are sent to us by God to help lead us to salvation?! The hymn Nearer my God to thee was recorded by Dylan in Nashville on 18/2/69(21) and is an Anglican hymn written by J.H. Dykes (1823-76):- 

Nearer my God to thee                                             Though, like a wanderer
Nearer to thee                                                           The Sun gone down
E’en though it be a cross                                           Darkness be over me
that reuseth me                                                          My rest astone
Still my soul would sing                                            Yet in my dreams I’d be
Nearer to thee.                                                           Nearer my God to thee

Let’s refer to one of his ‘Gospel’ raps from on stage at Akron, 18/5/80, where he seemingly alludes to this, or to a similar song; “Alright, we’ll do another song for you. I know a lot of Country and Western people do that. They sing very often, ‘You can put your shoes under my bed anytime’, and then they turn around and sing, ‘Oh Lord, just a Closer Walk With Thee’. Well, I can’t do that. That’s right, you cannot serve two masters. You gotta hate one and love the other one. You can not drink out of two cups”(9). 

Line 4; We met at the station where the mission bells ring. Is he referring to Sara? I can still hear the sound of those Methodist bells (Sara, Desire), or are the mission bells a reference to the Christian Vineyard Fellowship where he perhaps met the protagonist of this song, the mysterious she, who told him about Jesus and led him to the Vineyard Fellowship? Did the Rose of Sharon, viz. the Jewish woman (perhaps Sara), have to meet him at his new place of worship to talk to him on his level? While the mission bells did toll (Frankie Lee and Judas Priest, JWH).

The last mention of station by Dylan is on his first Christian song, Seven Days, recorded in 1976; Seven days, seven days I’ll be waiting at the station for her to arrive, all I have to do is survive(22). Station also brings to mind the Stations of the Cross in Jerusalem’s Via Delarosa (translated as The Way of the Cross), which supposedly mark the stops along the route that Jesus took whilst carrying his cross to the top of the hill to be crucified (earlier in the 31/3/81 version Dylan sings; Where the stop in the rain). 

Lines 5 & 6; She said, “I know what you’re thinking, but there ain’t a thing you can do about it, so let us just agree to agree”. This appears to indicate a woman dictating terms to Dylan, and it could be Sara laying down her terms for the divorce settlement/custody settlement.

Sara had petitioned for divorce in L.A. on 1/3/77 through her lawyer, Marvin Mitchelson (who would later gain much notoriety for securing huge alimony settlements for the stars and/or their spouses and he would become known as the Father of Palimony), and eventually ‘She reached agreement with Bob on a huge settlement estimated at around $12 million’ (Bob retained their $3 million refurbished Malibu home in the divorce settlement which geologists then reported was slipping into the ocean).

‘The bitter custody battle was finally settled when the custody of the children was given to Sara in late December 1977’(5). And once Dylan had lost the court custody battle there really wasn’t much that he could do about it, perhaps for the sake of their children, they should not continue to fight, but just agree to agree. (In his 31/3/81 studio version of Caribbean Wind he sings, We might as well let it be, and during his 12/11/80 Fox Warfield live version he sang Dave Mason’s, We Just Disagree). 

Untold Dylan: who we are what we do

Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

We welcome articles, contributions and ideas from all our readers.  Sadly no one gets paid, but if you are published here, your work will be read by a fairly large number of people across the world, ranging from fans to academics who teach English literature.  If you have an idea, or a finished piece send it as a Word file to Tony@schools.co.uk with a note saying that it is for publication on Untold Dylan.

We also have a very lively discussion group “Untold Dylan” on Facebook with around 5500 active members. Just type the phrase “Untold Dylan” in, on your Facebook page or follow this link 

You’ll find some notes about our latest posts arranged by themes and subjects on the home page of this site.  You can also see details of our main sections on this site at the top of this page under the picture.  Not every index is complete but I do my best.

But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

 

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Sheep in wolves’ clothing: the CD Bonus Tracks

By Aaron Galbraith

For the CD edition of our Sheep In Wolves Clothing album we thought we should entice potential buyers with the addition of a couple of bonus tracks.

First up is this take of Fred Rose’s “Thank God”

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jwETXLUWqP8&app=desktop

 

 This was recorded with Tom Petty and The Heartbreakers In 1986 in California and was broadcast during the Chabad Telethon that year.

The song was released as a posthumous single by Hank Williams in 1955.

 

The second bonus track we are including is Dylan’s acoustic take of Billy Joe Shaver’s “Old Five And Dimers (Like Me)”.

https://youtu.be/CLiQDYHlFwI

 

Dylan also recorded a full band electric version of the track, however we feel the acoustic take is not only better but a more appropriate final track for our album. Take a listen to both and let us know what you think.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=syiJ0_WKkuI

 However, we are finishing the CD version with the acoustic take.

And with that the album is complete and now it’s your turn! 

We did consider using the original cover design for the “Sheep In Wolves Clothing” album. But then we thought wouldn’t it be a great idea to ask the readers to help design the cover art for our album?

So, this is what we are doing now…asking for your help to design a cover (front & back) for the album “Sheep In Wolves Clothing”. If you are using a Dylan photo bear in mind the tracks were all recorded in 1986 to 1987, but you don’t need to use photos, it could be an original piece of artwork or you could incorporate the original album design in some way in your design…it’s totally up to you!

Also if you are sending it to us, please make sure there is no copyright assigned to the picture (such as Getty Images or anything with a (c) symbol) as that will mean we’ll need to pay a licence fee, and we don’t have the funds for that.

Here is the original design…

And the tracklisting should you want to include this is some way on the front or back..

Side 1

  1. Twist & Shout
  2. Just When I Neede You Most
  3. Willie And The Hand Jive
  4. Important Words
  5. Uranium Rock (Rock ‘em Dead)

Side 2.

  1. That Lucky Old Sun
  2. Got Love If You Want It
  3. Treasure Of Love
  4. Sidewalks, Fences And Walls
  5. Go Down Moses (Let My People Go)

CD bonus tracks

  1. Thank God
  2. Old Five And Dimers (Like Me)

You can of course write your own notes concerning this album, its origins, or anything else.

Send your design to Tony at Tony@schools.co.uk and we will publish them on the site in a future article. Remember to include your details so we can give you full credit and perhaps promote your other work if you have any. 

Maybe if we get enough submissions we might even run a poll to allow all of us to pick a winner!

And just because he can, Tony is now offering his favourite track from the album, to help you get in the mood.

https://youtu.be/N_tyciW_IRo

Untold Dylan: who we are what we do

Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

We welcome articles, contributions and ideas from all our readers.  Sadly no one gets paid, but if you are published here, your work will be read by a fairly large number of people across the world, ranging from fans to academics who teach English literature.  If you have an idea, or a finished piece send it as a Word file to Tony@schools.co.uk with a note saying that it is for publication on Untold Dylan.

We also have a very lively discussion group “Untold Dylan” on Facebook with around 5500 active members. Just type the phrase “Untold Dylan” in, on your Facebook page or follow this link 

You’ll find some notes about our latest posts arranged by themes and subjects on the home page of this site.  You can also see details of our main sections on this site at the top of this page under the picture.  Not every index is complete but I do my best.

But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

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Heron: the Dylan cover album, and your chance to join a merry gang.

by Aaron Galbraith and Tony Attwood

If you are a regular reader of Untold Dylan you will appreciate that not only is the site written by a variety of people, but it is written by a variety of people living not just in different countries but on at least three different continents.

To make the whole thing work we correspond primarily by email with Jochen, Larry, Aaron, Mike, Filip, mr tambourine and others feeding ideas and articles into Tony who then gets them in a hopeless muddle, loses them, finds them and ultimately publishes them – sometimes (but not always) even in the right order and under the right author’s name.

It is this combination of independent writers that makes Untold so vibrant – everyone is working alone but to the central idea of finding new things to say about Dylan’s music that have not been said before.  So the emphasis is: we each come up with our own ideas.

What follows is the text of an email from Aaron in the USA to Tony in England, and this time I (Tony) thought I would publish the email, just so you can see how Untold works – and to say, if you feel like joining this band of merry men (all men simply because as yet no women have offered us articles on a regular basis as yet but I am hopeful that will change), we are by and large mostly harmless.  Just email Tony@schools.co.uk

And there is an idea for a new series of articles if you feel like joining in – more details below the extracts from Heron’s album (or you can come up with your own idea for your own series if you wish).

Here is Aaron’s email to Tony

——

 I just found out that Heron (who made the version of John Brown we wrote about recently) got back together in the early 2000s and made a Dylan cover album in 2013 called Jokerman. I’ve been listening to it all day today and it’s quickly becoming one of my favorite Dylan covers albums.

It’s not just the usual tracks you find on Dylan covers discs, but also includes several more unusual songs, like Jokerman, Is Your Love In Vain and If Dogs Run Free. All the arrangements are really interesting and take the songs down a different path from anything I’ve ever heard before.

The opening version of It Ain’t Me Babe is done almost like an old spiritual, and by the time of Slow Train coming you might just be in love with the album. 

Then introducing Is Your Love In Vain with the music from This Land Is Your Land followed by the “Judas…I Don’t Believe You” clip, might just be genius!

There is some really great stuff on the album so I thought I’d pass it along to you to take a listen if you had the time…

This is Jokerman

And It Aint Me Babe

The videos do connect to each other but here’s one more selected

 

There’s a very English joke at the start of this concerning the railway links from the south west of England into west London.

Heron have their own website if you want to find out more.

If you would like to gain admission to our little group of writers, it is simple: just read some of the 1600+ articles on this site, and send me (Tony) an article that you should could be of interest to our readers.  Send it as a Word file attached to an email – not in the email itself – it makes my life so much easier.  Tony@schools.co.uk

Indeed Aaron has suggested that we might initiate a “Readers Choice” section wherein readers of Untold choose one track not by Dylan and write about it.  So not a cover of a Dylan song, nor Dylan covering someone else’s song, but a performance that is not Dylan at all but that Dylan fans might enjoy.   And we want not just a suggestion but a little article about the performers, and/or the song or album.

Come and join us.  We’re mostly harmless.

Untold Dylan: who we are what we do

Untold Dylan is written by people who want to write for Untold Dylan.  It is simply a forum for those interested in the work of the most famous, influential and recognised popular musician and poet of our era, to read about, listen to and express their thoughts on, his lyrics and music.

We welcome articles, contributions and ideas from all our readers.  Sadly no one gets paid, but if you are published here, your work will be read by a fairly large number of people across the world, ranging from fans to academics who teach English literature.  If you have an idea, or a finished piece send it as a Word file to Tony@schools.co.uk with a note saying that it is for publication on Untold Dylan.

We also have a very lively discussion group “Untold Dylan” on Facebook with around 5500 active members. Just type the phrase “Untold Dylan” in, on your Facebook page or follow this link 

You’ll find some notes about our latest posts arranged by themes and subjects on the home page of this site.  You can also see details of our main sections on this site at the top of this page under the picture.  Not every index is complete but I do my best.

But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

 

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Caribbean Wind part 1 – verses 1 and 2

by Paul Robert Thomas

Caribbean Wind

“People can learn everything about me through my songs, if they know where to look. They can just juxtapose them with certain other songs and draw a clear picture”. (Bob Dylan(1))

Introduction

“The powerful operations of God’s spirit, quickening or reviving the heart towards God, are compared to the blowing of the wind“. (John 3:8(2))

I must state from the outset that I rate Caribbean Wind as one of Dylan’s most important works of the early eighties, mostly as an indicator of the position of his soul, as a man who was now bereft of his family life following the embittered divorce proceedings and who had at first totally embraced Jesus Christ, but was quickly falling out of His grasp – at least the dogmatic grasp of the Christian Vineyard Fellowship, and who would soon return to the religion of his forefathers, Judaism.

The other important works of this period of inner conflict for Dylan are, Angelina, The Groom’s Still Waiting At The Altar and Every Grain of Sand and, listening to the three versions of Caribbean Wind that I have, the San Francisco, Fox Warfield Theater live performance of 12 November 1980, the studio version of 31 March 1981, and the official Biograph studio performance of 7 April 1981, one is immediately struck by the urgency and energy of these performances, irrespective of whether or not one can discern what he actually sings in between the choruses and albeit that the Biograph version has apparently been watered down and lyrically rewritten, done, one presumes, to protect identities and to distance himself emotionally and religiously from the song.

The story line has been changed somewhat, although not entirely for the worst, and I feel that the Biograph version is less overtly Christian and that he has injected more Judaic themes into it. Enough has been written by others about the actual performance(s) of Caribbean Wind, particularly and very eloquently by the likes of Paul Williams in his book, Bob Dylan Performing Artist 1974-1986, and by Clinton Heylin in his books, Behind The Shades and The Recording Sessions 1960-1994, and I do not propose to go over previously covered ground but will try and provide new insight into the sources and interpretations of some of the song’s lines, many of which are drawn from Scripture, and I will attempt to collate as much information as has been previously written about this song. In fact, the very first two lines of this rewritten Biograph version are drawn directly from the Old Testament Book of Song of Songs(3) ! 

It is a reasonable assumption that Dylan does not use Biblical lines and passages just for effect and I believe that his intention is to lead us, through our perception of the meaning of that particular Biblical line or passage, to greater understanding and to further expand the meaning of that feeling that he is trying to invoke within us through the lines of that song, and I do not propose in this article to quote whole Biblical passages verbatim, but I will, where I feel it necessary and relevant, quote from corresponding lines or verses which I feel relate to that feeling and it should be borne in mind that this is purely my own personal opinion based upon my own studies and knowledge of both Christian and Judaic theological doctrines. A lot of Dylan’s Biblical preoccupation seems to be taken up by his almost total belief in the “Coming End of Days” as expounded in the New Testament Book of The Revelation of St. John the Theologian, which in itself is derived from a number of other Old Testament Books, including the Books of Daniel and Ezekiel. 

Of one thing that I am sure, and that Dylan has an intimate and studied knowledge of Scripture amply demonstrated by his use of Scripture in his compositions from the very beginning of his career to the present and that he has a deep knowledge and understanding of their true anagogical meaning, and I will attempt in the following composition to reveal to you those lines, words or feelings, that I believe derive from Scripture as used by Dylan in this work. 

It is most probable that Caribbean Wind was written after the end of the “79” tour which ended on 21/5/80 at Dayton, Ohio, and before the commencement of the “80” tour on 9/11/80, the first version of Caribbean Wind was performed in the studio sometime in October 1980

https://vimeo.com/307193835

Dylan spent a lot of his spare time sailing around the Bahamas and the Caribbean on a yacht named The Water Pearl he co-owned, which was built on the Caribbean Island of Benquia and was launched in November 1979. Although the co-owner of the yacht most probably made it to the launch, Dylan was too busy touring at the time, from 1/11/79 until 9/12/79, mostly at his first sojourn at San Francisco’s Fox Warfield Theatre; “I’m usually either in New York or on the West Coast or down in the Caribbean. Me and another guy have a boat down there….”(4).

In the Biograph, Cameron Crowe interview, Dylan elucidated further upon the song; “I started it in St. Vincent when I woke up from a strange dream in the hot sun….I was thinking about living with somebody for all the wrong reasons”.”Caribbean Wind is an important song in Dylan’s oeuvre, particularly as its synthesis of apocalyptic conceit and his familiar theme of disaffected love was more familiar terrain to his fans than anything explored on his previous two albums, suggesting that he was at least learning to assimilate rather than ignore his pre-Born Again work. That the song reflected Dylan’s own problems with women, given past history, seems extremely likely”(5). 

In order not to become too confused with so many different lyrics and versions of one song, I will try to remain faithful to the song’s lyrics as published in the Bob Dylan Lyrics 1962-1985 book(6) which is, more or less, the Biograph version of the song and are the fourth and final set of lyrics for Caribbean Wind. I will also, later in this article, make passing references to the second set of lyrics and song from the San Francisco 12/11/80 live performance, and also with the third set of lyrics and song from the studio performance of 31 March 1981 (as yet I haven’t managed to locate a set of lyrics from the first studio performance of Caribbean Wind from October 1980, and those tapes that I do have which are marked ‘10/80’, are all this same 31/3/81 performance). 

Caribbean Wind – Biograph – 7/4/81 (Rundown Studios, Santa Monica, California)

Musicians: Bob Dylan, vocals and piano; Fred Tackett, Guitar; Steve Ripley, Guitar; Tim Drummond, Bass; Carl Pickhardt, Keyboards; Jim Keltner, Drums; Clydie King, Carolyn Dennis, Madelyn Quebec and Regina McCrery, Backing Vocals. 

verse 1 

She was the Rose of Sharon, from paradise lost,
From the city of seven hills, near the place of the cross,
I was playing a show in Miami, in the Theatre of Divine Comedy.
Told about Jesus, told about the rain,
She told me about the jungle, where her brothers were slain,
By the man who invented iron and disappeared so mysteriously.

verse 2 

Was she a child or an angel, did we go too far?
Were we sniper bait, did we follow a star?
Through the hole in the wall to where the long arm of the law cannot reach.
Could I been used and played as a pawn?
It certainly was possible as the gay night wore on
When men bathed in perfume, and practiced the hoax of free speech

chorus 

And them Caribbean winds still blow, from Nassau to Mexico,
Fanning the flames in the furnace of desire.
And them distant ships of liberty, on them iron waves so bold and free,
Bringing everything that’s near to me, nearer to the fire.

verse 3 

Sea breeze blowin’, there’s a hell hound loose,
Redeemed men, who have escaped from the noose,
Preaching faith and salvation, waiting for the night to arrive.
He was well connected, but her heart was a snare,
And she had left him to die in there,
He was goin’ down slow, just barely staying alive.

verse 4 

The cry of the peacock, flies buzzing my head,
Ceiling fan broken, there’s a heat in my bed,
Street band playing ‘Nearer My God to Thee.’
We met at the station, where the mission bells ring,
She said ‘I know what you’re thinking, but there ain’t a thing,
You can do about it, so let us just agree to agree’.

repeat chorus

verse 5 

Atlantic City, by the cold gray sea,
Hear a voice crying ‘daddy’, I always think it’s for me,
But it’s only the silence in the buttermilk hills that call.
Every new messenger bringing evil report,
‘bout armies on the march, and time that is short,
And famines and earthquakes and train wrecks and the tearin’ down of the wall.

verse 6 

Did you ever have a dream, that you couldn’t explain?
Ever meet your accusers, face to face in the rain?
She had chrome brown eyes that I won’t forget as long as she’s gone.
I see the screws breakin’ loose, see the devil pounding on tin,
I see a house in the country being torn apart from within,
I can hear my ancestors calling from the land far beyond. 

repeat chorus 

(1985 Special Rider Music) 

The Song

Verse 1 – The Rose of Sharon 

I suspect that Dylan’s changing personal relationships and his declining dependency and also disillusionment with the Christian Vineyard Fellowship influenced the lyrical changes to Caribbean Wind, the first lines of which from the 2nd version at San Francisco on 21/11/80, and the third version from 31 March 1981, remain virtually unchanged. The 31/3/81 version states; She was well-rehearsed, fair brown and blonde, and the 12/11/80 San Francisco performance states; She was from Haiti, fair brown and intense, and from this one can deduce that she is a dark-skinned Haitian from the West Indies. By the time of the Biograph (fourth) version, she had changed identity. 

Lines 1 & 2 state; She was the Rose of Sharon from Paradise Lost, from the City of Seven Hills near the Place of the Cross.

The Rose of Sharon is drawn directly from the Old Testament Book of Song of Songs (or, Song of Solomon) Ch. 2:1. She is also the Lily Among Thorns, as mentioned by Dylan in Someone’s Gotta Hold of my Heart, (later rewritten to become Tight Connection to my Heart). She is Israel, the daughter of Zion, the Rose of Sharon, the Lily Among Thorns. If you read back to Ch. 1:6 in Song of Songs then this she, the Rose of Sharon, is revealed as being black, as is the original she from the 31/3/81 and 12/11/80 versions of Caribbean Wind. By the time of the Biograph version, she appears to have changed both colour and religion! Incidentally, Song of Songs is a parable about the love between Israel and her God told in terms of a woman and her lover.

From Paradise Lost could refer to either the Garden of Eden from the Book of Genesis, or to the Land of Milk and Honey – Israel, (or/and to Milton’s poem). From the City of Seven Hills near the Place of the Cross, identifies the location as being the now joint Israeli/Palestinian City of Hebron, which is indeed built upon seven hills and is very near to the Place of the Cross, identified in Luke 23:33 as being Calvary, near Jerusalem. So it appears that the rewritten version of 7/4/81 has either Israel, or more likely, an Israeli/Jewish woman replacing this brown Haitian Lady as the opening character! What I find even more intriguing is the fact that Hebron is also the burial place of the Biblical character Sarah (Dylan’s ex-wife spelt her name without the ‘h’ at the end), and also of Sarah’s husband, Abraham (Dylan’s father was called ‘Abe’, which is short for Abraham ); ‘Abraham buried Sarah his wife in the cave of the field of Machpelah before Mamre; the same is Hebron’ (Genesis 23:19), and; ‘The field which Abraham purchased, there was Abraham buried, and Sarah his wife’ (Genesis 25:10).

So perhaps Dylan has changed the identity of the she from his black Haitian woman lover to that of his ex-wife Sara – thereby perhaps charting the beginnings of his move back to Judaism from Christianity, and with a stroke of his pen, not only confusing the plot, but also apparently making his love life appear more stable than perhaps it actually was! 

Line 3 states; I was playing a show in Miami in the Theatre of Divine Comedy, and is identified by Paul Williams as being the final show of the 1978 tour at Hollywood, Florida on 16/12/78(7). A silver cross had been thrown onto the stage at San Diego on 17/11/78, and Dylan, uncharacteristically, picked it up and kept it and it would, as he later revealed in a 1979 interview in San Diego, help to influence and fuel that ‘slow train’ that he was starting to ride upon !! During these last concerts of the 1978 tour Dylan started to introduce Biblical lines to his concert songs, inserting into his performance of Tangled up in Blue such rewritten lines as; She opened up the Bible and started quoting it to me, the Gospel according to Matthew, verse 3, Chapter 33 (which incidentally does not exist, as the Book of Matthew ends at Ch. 28:20!). The New Testament Book of Matthew is Christianity’s attempt to convince the Jews that Jesus Christ was The Messiah for whom they longed. 

Line 4 states; Told about Jesus, told about the rain, thus indicating that he was told by her, the Rose of Sharon, about Jesus and the rain, (both earlier versions of 31/3/81 and 12/11/80 contain different words). Was it thus, at this 16/12/78 Florida show, that she told him all about Jesus? It would of course be of great interest to try and identify her, the she of this song whom Dylan has apparently gone to great lengths to hide the identity of, particularly with his final rewrite changing her from a black Haitian (on the live 12/11/80 version) to a Jew (on the Biograph version)! Helena Springs had been a backing singer with Dylan since the 1978 tour started in Japan on 20/2/78(8), and he reportedly become very ‘close’ to her; ‘He turned to those in his band who had discovered peace with Christ, notably Helena Springs, the lady with whom he had been writing songs of betrayal and loneliness……..and who, of all the musicians, was closest to Dylan at this point’(5). Helena Springs – “We were together in Brisbane one evening (between 12-15/3/78) he started strumming his guitar and I started to sing and that was when we got Walk Out in the Rain”(5). This song appears on page 589 of The Lyrics 1962-1985 book(6) as a joint Helena Springs/Dylan composition – thus from where the line in Caribbean Wind; She told me about Jesus and the rain comes from ?

Another revealing line from Walk Out in the Rain is; I have come from so far away, just to put a ring on your finger! A similarly revealing line also emerges from the co-written Helena Springs/Dylan/Greg Lake composition, Coming From the Heart the Road is Long; Of all my loves you’ve been the closest! In fact, Helena Springs would depart from Dylan and the band’s company during the winter of 1980, perhaps one of the reasons for the rewrites and for changing the opening characters identity in Caribbean Wind ? Was she, Helena Springs, from Haiti ? I don’t know. 

The last 2 lines of verse 1 state; She told me about the jungle where her brothers were slain, and is a complete rewrite from the previous 2 versions. Were her brothers slain in the jungles of Haiti by the evil dictator Papadoc ? This last line escapes me; By the man who invented iron and disappeared so mysteriously. Who did invent iron ? The first mention in the Bible of iron is at Geneses 4:22 and relates to a relative of Cain (who himself was mentioned by Dylan in Every Grain of Sand), ‘Tubalcain, an instructor of every artificer in brass and iron’. The 12/11/80 live versions last two lines flowed much better; She told me about the vision, told me about the pain, that had risen from the ashes and divided in her memory, and relates directly to; ‘Tell the vision to no man, until the Son of Man be risen from the dead’, at Matthew 17:10, and again demonstrates Dylan’s attempt to de-Christianise his Biograph lyrics. 

Verse 2 – Child or Angel ? 

Line 1 asks; Was she a child or an Angel, did we go too far ? ‘‘The term child in the New Testament is more often used of those who have believed and accepted Christ’(2). An Angel means literally ‘messenger/a messenger of God’ (Genesis 24:7). Did Dylan go too far either/both with her, or/and with his conversion to Christianity ? 

Line 2 is apparently misprinted in the Lyrics book and should read; Were we sniper bait, did we follow a star? Who used them as sniper bait ? The answer is perhaps contained within line 4 of this verse as discussed below. Did we follow a star? ‘The Bright and Morning Star’ are collective titles in Scripture for Jesus Christ (Revelation 2:28(2)), and does Dylan thus infer that he blindly followed that star, that is, the teachings of Jesus Christ? Covenant Woman shining like a Morning Star (Covenant Woman from the album Saved) ‘If Covenant Woman was none other than Helena Springs, as has long been rumored, their break-up shortly before the Saved sessions may have coloured his commitment to the song’, and, ‘Clydie King had joined Dylan’s band before the Saved album sessions (between 11-15/2/80) replacing Helena Springs. She also appears to have quickly replaced Springs in his affections’(5). 

Line 3; Through a hole in the wall to where the long arm of the law cannot reach. ‘The Wall’ is the Wailing, or Western Wall in Jerusalem, the only remnant of Judaism’s Holiest of Holy Temple(s). The long arm of the law refers not to the police, but to ‘The Mosiac Law’; ‘And when I looked, behold a hole in the wall. Then said he unto me, Son of Man, dig now in the wall….and when I had digged into the wall, behold a door’(Ezekiel 8:7&8). Dylan’s line also loosely brings to mind the Hole in the Wall Gang from the film Pat Garrett and Billy the Kid, named after their retreat as outlaws to their place of refuge. The hole in the Wailing or Western Wall, the symbol of Judaism, could be said to be Christianity. There ain’t no wall you can’t cross over, ain’t no fire you can’t walk through (Need a Woman). 

Line 4; Could I have been used as a pawn? Perhaps he felt that he was used by the Christian Vineyard Fellowship? Helena Springs says; “I remember a lot of people (backstage at the Fox Warfield Theatre in San Francisco) were from the Vineyard Fellowship in Los Angeles….I remember a lot of them pressuring him about a lot of things….Like if he’d drink some wine….They were not allowing him to live. They were just being too much of a headache. And I remember one time he said to me ‘God it’s awfully tight, it’s so tight, you know’! And I thought and said ‘Yeah, it seems like you gotta get out from under it a bit’. And I felt a lot of pressure from those people….Also he found a lot of hypocrisy from those people….They were saying one thing, and doing another. He mentioned that to me too”(5). And San Francisco seems to be the subject of the last two remaining lines in verse 2: 

Lines 5 & 6; It certainly was possible as the gay night wore on, when men bathed in perfume and practiced the hoax of free speech. San Francisco was the ‘gay capital’ of the USA if not the world, and the gay night and men bathed in perfume certainly leans towards homosexual men. Dylan did take to ranting and raving against the homosexual bathhouses of San Francisco from the stage of the Fox Warfield Theatre in San Francisco. Later from the stage at Hartford on 8/5/80 he said; “We started out in San Francisco. It’s a kind of unique town these days. I think it’s either one third or two thirds of the population that are homosexuals in San Francisco. I’ve heard that said. Now, I guess they’re working up to 100%, I don’t know. But any way, it’s a growing place for homosexuals, and I read they’ve homosexual politics, and it’s a political party. I don’t mean it’s going on in somebody’s closet, I mean it’s political! All right, you know what I’m talking about? Anyway, I would just think, well, I guess, the iniquity’s not yet full. And I don’t wanna be around when it is”!(9). ‘Iniquity’! Now there’s a grand Biblical word which means; ‘Great injustice, or wickedness’(10). ‘Dylan’s committed to Christ, but Christ isn’t Christianity, and Christianity itself is no monolith. Joan of Arc was burned at the stake for doing what Dylan and other born-again Christians consider the essence of their religious practice, talking to and listening to God’(7). This quote is from Paul Williams, an important Dylan commentator who, like most of his contemporary’s, seems to have difficulty in accepting that Dylan’s conversion to Christianity could have much to do with God, but more to do with his rejection by women! (In fact, the Catholic Church realized their error of judgment and later made Joan of Arc a saint. Who is to say that neither she nor Dylan could possibly have been in communication with the higher spirit ?!! ) 

The Chorus. 

Line 1; And them Caribbean Winds still blow from Nassau to Mexico. Dylan asked on Shot of Love; What makes the wind blow tonight? Why Caribbean? Why Wind? In the late 70’s and early 80’s Dylan spent a lot of his time sailing around the Bahamas and the Caribbean on a yacht named The Water Pearl he co-owned; “I’m usually either in New York or on the West Coast or down in the Caribbean. Me and another guy have a boat down there….”(4). In the Biograph Cameron Crowe interview Dylan elucidated further upon the song; “I started it in St. Vincent when I woke up from a strange dream in the hot sun….I was thinking about living with somebody for all the wrong reasons”. Nassau, Latitude 25.05 North, Longitude 77.2 West in the Bahamas, is situated to the east of Mexico and is down the Gulf of Mexico and Dylan is informing us that the wind is blowing from the east to the west, which is the direction that he is drifting in and is in fact in the opposite direction to the ‘Sun’, viz. Jesus Christ, that he saw shining from the west to the east earlier in I Shall be Released, and the east to west direction follows Matthew 24:27 in; ‘for as the lightening cometh out of the east and shineth even to the west, so shall also the Coming of the Son of Man be’. Has he lost some of his fervent belief in Jesus Christ as the Saviour, and is he longing for His second return when He’ll replace wrong with right (When He Returns). Certainly, as we explore this song further, and also that period which followed from 1981 onwards, this certainly could be the case. 

Dylan feels the wind, the breath of God, just as he felt the presence of God in his song/hymn; Every Grain of Sand, and the wind is described thus; ‘The powerful operations of God’s spirit, quickening or reviving the heart towards God, are compared to the blowing of the wind’ (John 3:8). ‘He causeth His wind to blow and the waters to flow’ (Psalms 147:18), and the chorus line; And them Caribbean Winds still blow indicates, as the breath of God, the eternal promise of God’s presence (Deut. 33:27), and this wind has been blowing since and before the beginning of time; ‘He caused an east wind to blow in the heaven’ (Psalms 78:26); ‘The spirit of God moved upon the face of the waters (Genesis 1:2). The Hebrew word for both wind and spirit are the same – Ruach, thus Biblical interpreters use for their English translation the word spirit, but wind is equally correct! So Dylan is saying that His spirit moves over this earth, which is particularly clearer in the 12/11/80 San Francisco live version, where the wind is no longer blowing from Nassau to Mexico but encompasses the whole earth from Trinidad to Mexico, The Ivory Coast to My Back Yard, and From Tokyo to the British Isle. In the Soncino Chumash Commentary this verse of Geneses 1:2 is explained thus; ‘The Throne of glory was suspended in the air and heaven over the face of the waters, sustained by the breath of God’(11). 

Line 2; Fanning the flames in the furnace of desire. Surely the furnace of desire is the soul? ‘Whose fire is in Zion and his furnace in Jerusalem’ (Isaiah 31:9); ‘He shall baptize you with the Holy Ghost, and with fire whose fan is in His hand ’(Matthew 3:11 & Luke 3:16&17); ‘Delight thyself also in the Lord, and he shall give thee the desires of thine heart’ (Psalms 37:4). You look into the fiery furnace.. (Jokerman, Infidels). 

Line 3;. And them distant ships of liberty on them iron waves so bold and free. ‘The image of ‘the ship’ in Dylan’s writings:- ‘One of Dylan’s prophesies, optimistic and vengeful in heralding the day when evil will be purged. The allusions have the powerful roll of gospel, evoking both Old Testament figures, like Pharaoh and Goliah, and the spirit of the Revelation of St. John the Divine. The ship is a Universal Salvation Symbol’(12). 

Oh the time will come up 
when the winds will stop 
and the breeze will cease to be breathin’ 
Like the stillness in the wind 
‘fore the hurricane begins 
The hour when the ship comes in (13). 

‘Throughout myth and literature, we find water as the symbol of the unconscious, spirituality, and death, and the ship as the tiny ego of man making its lonely or triumphant voyage across dangerous deeps’(12). ‘Then they willingly received Jesus into the ship, and immediately the ship was at the land wither they went’ (John 4:21). ‘And Jesus sat down and taught the people out of the ship (Luke 5:3). In Caribbean Wind, the ship is still in the distance but is within view and is making its way to him, bringing everything that’s near to me. In Jokerman, 3 years later on the album Infidels, those same ships are now sailing away from him into the mist. Some of the images in Jokerman appear to have been borrowed from Caribbean Wind. As well as; Distant ships, also, Only a matter of time ‘til night comes stepping in/Waiting for night to arrive; Hurricane was blowing/Caribbean winds still blow; Fiery furnace/Furnace of desire/Nearer to the fire, also, Iron/Iron waves; Eyes of the idol/Chrome brown eyes; Preacher man/Preaching faith and salvation, also Jungle, Sea, Angel and Bird are common to both songs. Iron is used as a symbol of hardness and strength in the Bible(2). ‘We cut through iron…’(In the Summertime, Shot of Love).

Dylan, in fact, was born and grew up amongst the iron ore hills of Deluth and Hibbbing and ‘iron’ is a recurring symbol in his songs, and he said this from the stage of San Francisco’s Fox Warfield Theatre on 22/11/80; “Where I come from the ground is metallic. And as a matter of fact during the 2nd World War 90% of all iron and steel that went into all the ships and the boats and airplanes and all kind of weaponry, 90% of all the iron and steel that went into all that came from the area where I was, uh – lived. They dug it out of the ground there….”(7) ‘Every Poem an epitaph, and any action is a step to the block, to the fire, down the sea’s throat’(14). 

Line 4; Bringing everything that’s near to me nearer to the fire, relates directly to what Jesus said; ‘Jesus said whoever is near to me is near to the fire, and whoever is far from me is far from the Kingdom’(15). Dylan relates that he ‘wrote Caribbean Wind after waking up from a strange dream in the sun’ (Biograph, 1985 interview), and he could be leading us to the Old Testament Book of Daniel, in which Daniel interprets the dream of the king, and in Daniel’s account, he refers to iron, iron toes, fiery furnace and to the flame of the fire. ‘Fire is an intrinsic element of the revelation at the burning bush. The thorn bush is burning but is not consumed. On the one hand fire is a universal symbol for the mystery of God’s presence.

Fire is also how the prophets describe divine prophecy, and in the Book of Palms 104:4 we read; ‘He who makes winds his messengers, flaming fire his servants’(16). Fire is often used as a symbol of God in Scripture(2); ‘And in his right hand was a fiery law’ (Deut. 33:2). ‘The Torah is a law given from the midst of fire and lightening’(11). ‘Our Saviour is compared to fire’ (Mal. 3:2) and; ‘The Holy Ghost is likewise compared to fire’ (Matthew 3:11). 

Everything that’s near to me, refers to Dylan’s beliefs and everything and everyone that he values and holds dear and true. 

All manner of thing shall be well 
When the tongues of flame are in-folded 
into the crowned knot of fire 
and the fire and the rose are one (14) 

This series on Caribbean Wind continues shortly.

Other reviews of Caribbean Wind on this site

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Not Dark Yet VI: the music and the covers

Not Dark Yet VI – the music and the covers, part 1

by Jochen Markhorst and Tony Attwood 

Despite the despondent lyrics “Not Dark Yet” is not a jeremiad, thanks to the music – and just as much to the production and arrangement of Lanois. Over a carpet of guitars, the song unrolls in a pleasantly languid cadence, the music goes up when the lyrics descend, and the key remains mostly major, so not minor.

But that does not yet explain the secret, magical power of the accompanying music. A musician like Tony Attwood can identify this magical power very well:

Not Dark Yet is in standard 4/4 time – meaning four crotchet beats in each bar. So, you hear four beats with the heaviest accent on the first beat of each four. You are counting

1-2-3-4, 1-2-3-4, etc etc.

The first oddity is that the band plays the first beat, but Dylan starts singing on the second beat. That’s not unknown but still quite rare.

So if you were saying the beats when there are no words you would say

one Shadows are falling…… four one and I’ve been here all day…. four

With “falling” and “day” held on so that they go over two beats. 

But then at the end of the line the band put in two more beats in the music. There are no lyrics at this point, just two extra beats.

So you have two groups (in music known as “bars”) of four beats (which have the words sung) and then one bar of two beats which is music only. This pattern continues through the whole song.

To try and explain this further here below are the opening lines with the beats written above. Obviously, every beat is of equal value, so you count them slowly at a standard pace. If you make each beat one second, that is about right. A classical musician would call this “Crotchet equals 60”, meaning 60 crotchet beats a minute, one a second; a crotchet being a standard single beat in music. 

Writing this music out you would have four crotchets in each bar, except at the end of each line of lyrics the musicians play an extra bar of just two beats. 

Here are the opening lines with the beats indicated – the additional two beats at the end of each line are in bold

1    2                      3 4   1           2                     3 4                1 2 

     Shadows are falling    and I been here all day…


1            2              3 4  1                     2                3 4             1 2

     It’s too hot to sleep    and  time is running away

 

1     2                   3 4                1     2                3      4           1 2

     Feel like my soul has       turned into steel

 

And so on through the song, even in the instrumental verse.

It gives a sense of timelessness, because we cannot automatically count out the beats (unless one is used to doing this as a musician). It is a brilliant idea to give that feeling that time is just passing – without it a huge amount of impact that the song has would be lost.

The unorthodox choice to leave one verse without vocals “empty”, and thus not to fill it with a guitar solo, works excellently. Although the poet does not use words of consolation or resignation, the music lifts the whole song up to: melancholy. It is the melancholy of Rilke’s Herbsttag, the film music of Schindler’s List, the paintings of De Chirico.

It is mastery – music that goes beyond simply supporting or enhancing the poetry; as a matter of fact, it is only the music that brings the light that cannot be found in the words, giving the in itself bleak poem, a much deeper colour.

Failed covers of this work hardly exist, although this time Dylan is rarely surpassed. The notes are in the right place, apparently – even with the artists who lack the age or conviction to play this song, it remains a beautiful piece of art. Many covers rightly adopt the slow, long lines of the original, but the versions of the inevitable ukulele girls on YouTube are also fun.

Slowhand

Anton Fig drummed with all the Greats of the Earth. As a regular drummer of David Letterman’s house band, the CBS Orchestra, he is in the enviable position of accompanying superstars like Bruce Springsteen, James Brown and Miles Davis, but he is also a much in demand session musician. Mick Jagger, Joan Armatrading, Madonna, Joe Cocker… the list is long and dazzling.

They are not always the easiest employers, and in June 2002 journalist Robyn Flans asks Anton Fig how he survived such a notoriously demanding, eternally dissatisfied and passionate bandleader as Ray Charles.

MD: Ray Charles has a reputation for chewing up and spitting out players.
Anton: I’ve played with him on the show and at the Rock ’N’ Roll Hall Of Fame, and I’ve never had a problem. First of all, you have to watch his feet. He conducts with them. I remember the first time I played with him on the Letterman show. I couldn’t see his feet, so I actually got a camera monitor so I could.

Watch his feet. The trick will have helped Anton Fig again when he has to show up at Dylan’s, for Empire Burlesque and for Knocked Out Loaded. Dylan has the same tell.

Producer Don DeVito reveals the trick to a desperate Eric Weissberg during the bizarre, hallucinatory first recording session for Blood On The Tracks, September 16, 1974 in New York. 

Until midnight Dylan overwhelms the musicians with (fragments of) “Simple Twist Of Fate”, “Call Letter Blues” (which turns into “Meet Me In The Morning” without warning at the second take), “Idiot Wind”, “You’re Gonna Make Me Lonesome When You Go” and “Tangled Up In Blue”. While listening back to one take, Dylan already plays another song right through it, he gives absolutely no clues, doesn’t even reveal in which key he’s playing (or that his guitar is in the unusual open D-tuning) or starts another song halfway through the recording.

Any other session Weissberg would have walked out, he says. But this is Dylan. “Remember, Eric,” he says to himself, “this guy’s a genius. Maybe this is how geniuses work.”

He’s being rescued by Don DeVito, the producer who already has some experience with Dylan. In his book Making Records. The Scenes Behind The Music (2007), Phil Ramone, the recording engineer on duty, devotes an entire chapter to Blood On The Tracks, and describes DeVito’s intervention:

“There were no charts and no rehearsals. The musicians had to watch Bob’s hands to figure out what key he was playing in. Don DeVito also gave them a suggestion: “To stay in the groove, you’ve got to watch his feet,” Don explained. “It’s something I learned from [producer] Bob Johnston, and that I witnessed on earlier sessions with Dylan.”

And Eric Clapton, who had similar disconcerting experiences during the Desire recording sessions, shares a comparable revelation. Clapton probably saw a kindred spirit: Slowhand himself moves feet and even the whole leg with spasm-like convulsions when he is in the groove. 

The recording of Clapton’s performance of “Not Dark Yet” in the Royal Albert Hall, May 2009, nicely demonstrates this peculiarity, also because he’s playing there sitting on a kitchen chair – left foot tapping the beat, suddenly his heel swings away, the knee swings out and in extremis the entire left leg – the contrast with guitarist Andy Fairweather Low and bassist Willie Weeks, who flank him, also on kitchen chairs, is beautiful; both accompanists tap conservatively along, left foot only, with the beat.

The song’s execution is magnificent. Not substantially different from the original, which is no objection, of course. Clapton has a deep respect for the song and its author. Ever since ’99, when he accompanies his guest Bob Dylan at the Eric Clapton & Friends To Benefit Crossroads Centre Antigua concert in Madison Square Garden. Dylan sings and plays the guitar, of course, but on this evening it’s especially remarkable that the moderate guitarist Dylan takes on almost all guitar solos – while standing next to one of the world’s best blues guitarists, he fumbles through Slowhand‘s solo in the blues classic “It Takes A Lot To Laugh”. Not every note is right on spot, to put it mildly. But Clapton is a gentleman and, moreover, does have respect. He politely steps back – even at the finale “Crossroads”, the Robert Johnson monument of which Clapton has been the main curator for over thirty years, since his glory days as Cream guitarist. 

No matter. The pure, boyish pleasure of both men in their fifties makes up for everything.  

“Not Dark Yet” remains on Clapton’s playlist, that spring 2009 tour, and his autobiography reveals how the song is under his skin.

He talks about his childhood. His mother, who later turns out to be not his mother but his grandmother, has a deformed face, “a massive scar underneath her left cheekbone that gave the impression that a piece of her cheek had been hollowed out”. It doesn’t affect her self-awareness, Eric says, quite on the contrary:

In his song “Not Dark Yet,” Dylan wrote, “Behind every beautiful face there’s been some kind of pain.” Her suffering made her a very warm person with a deep compassion for other people’s dilemmas. She was the focus of my life for much of my upbringing.

Granted, he does not quote entirely correctly (it’s beautiful thing, not beautiful face), but certainly his mate Dylan won’t mind. Live, on stage, Eric always sings it properly. Foot-swinging, knee-twitching and leg-jerking.

 

Jochen is a regular reviewer of Dylan’s work on Untold.  His books are available via Amazon both in paperback and on Kindle:

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William Shakespeare And The Great Chain Of Being

 

By Larry Fyffe

Bob Dylan in a number of his song considers that he’s trapped in a physical world that’s an imperfect reflection of an external ideal One – as the philosopher Plato claimed it to be. That is, the eternal, supposedly good, Absolute Monad or God (if you like) is too far off to be knowable to mere mortals while the relatively observable “Demiurge”, creator of the physical world in Time, is a flawed emanation therefrom.

In a number of other songs, Bob Dylan appears to agree with the more recent NeoPlationists’ claim that the Creator and the Absolute God are not fragmented even though they get in trouble deep when trying to explain the existence of ‘evil’, or at least ‘ignorance’, in the world inhabited by human beings.

Dylan ponders William Shakespeare’s NeoPlationist outlook; according to old Bill, the physical world is composed of a clear order. It’s all there in the code of the ‘great chain of being’, set down by the Absolute God Himself, and this God makes sure that it is known to Mankind – ie, king, queen; husband, wife; son, daughter, etc.

Furthermore, according to this code, the disruption of this divine order leads to trouble. In the play below, a king demands that his daughter express loyalty to him above and beyond her obligations to others in the chain:

Lear: Nothing shall come of nothing; speak again

Cordillia: Unhappy that I am, I can not heave my heart into my mouth
I love your majesty according to my bond, nor more nor less

Lear: How, how, Cordillia!, mend your speech a little lest you mar your fortunes ….

Cordillia: Sure, I shall never marry like my sisters to love my father all
(William Shakespeare: King Lear, Act I, sc. i)

A theme that’s repeated in the following song lyrics. Tension is created in the social fabric by the possibility of straying off the narrow brick road by ignoring the sign that has its arrow pointed in the direction of the ‘great chain of being’:

We carried you in our arms
On Independence Day
And now you cast us all aside
And put us on our way
Oh what dear daughter beneath the sun
Would treat her father so
To always wait upon him hand and foot
And always tell him 'no' ?
Bob Dylan: Tears Of Rage ~ Dylan/Manuel)

The NeoPlatonists also run into the problem of how time and change is created by a supposedly timeless, eternal God:

Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow
Creeps in this petty place from day to day
(William Shakespeare: Macbeth, Act V, sc. v)

An issue that does not go unnoticed in the following song lyrics:

Today, tomorrow, and yesterday too
The flowers are dying like all things do
(Bob Dylan: I Contain Multitudes)

Things get rotten in the state of Denmark for sure – apparently ‘unnatural” events happen, but somehow the ‘natural’ order manages to restore itself:

Ghost Of King Hamlet: Murder most foul, as in the best it is
But this most foul, strange and unnatural
(William Shakespeare: Hamlet, Act I, sc. v)

It’s all enough to make a skeptic out of anyone who’d like to believe in the regenerative outlook of the NeoPlatonists:

What is the truth, and where did it go
Ask Oswald and Ruby, they ought a know
(Bob Dylan: Murder Most Foul)

Seems that all one can do is dream, or imagine that there is a better place than the real world of existence where death abounds:

Mercutio: Her chariot is an empty hazel nut
Made by the joiner squirrel, or old grub
Time out of mind the fairies' coach-makers
(William Shakespeare: Romeo And Juliet, Act I, sc. iv)

Not so claims a latter-day Romantic Transcendentalist. Walt Whitman in his poems’, or at least in those written in his pre-Civil War days, welds the soul to the flesh of the body; this techno-romantic outlook epitomizes the philosophy known as NeoPlatonism; the goodly Spirit of the Absolute God pervades the natural world:

Served those, who time out of mind
Made on granite walls rough
Sketches of the sun, moon, ships, ocean waves
(Walt Whitman: Leaves of Grass; 'Song Of The Broad Axe')

Poet Robert Frost solves the problem for himself by taking a middle-of-the of the road approach. As far as songster Bob Dylan goes, it’s difficult to tell whose side he is on.

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Not Dark Yet 5: The greatest recordings

by Jochen Markhorst

When he is told in early 2017 that he has only a few months left to live at most, Jimmy LaFave does not consider that an excuse to shy away from action. He continues to perform, he remains committed to the Woody Guthrie Foundation, he continues to record songs and he continues to honour his other great hero, Bob Dylan.

He performs until three days before his death (May 21, 2017), but his intention to record another hundred of his favourite songs doesn’t materialize – the counter remains stuck at twenty. 

These recordings are released July 13, 2018, more than a year after his death, one day after his sixty-second birthday. The double CD Peace Town is arguably his most beautiful album, a crushing testament of a great musician, who audibly fights the approaching death. The tumours in his chest are already pressing against his windpipe, which makes his emotional, hoarse voice even more poignant. The three Dylan songs are, as always with this great, great Dylan interpreter, breath-taking and now, in this context, get a new charge: “What Good Am I”, “My Back Pages” and, number 18, “You’re Gonna Make Me Lonesome When You Go”.

The well chosen final, Tim Easton’s “Goodbye Amsterdam”, with the now heartbreaking opening line Goodbye Amsterdam, I didn’t want to leave just yet and the beautifully sad last words, literally the farewell words:

When there’s no destination
You just keep going ‘til your time runs out
If it is to be then it’s up to me
Now goodbye Amsterdam

“Not Dark Yet” would have been appropriate, obviously. But LaFave already recorded it, for his album Cimarron Manifesto in 2007.

The perfection of that particular recording, LaFave wisely concludes, cannot be improved. The unique phrasing of the hoarse, high-pitched voice he achieves is matched in his latest live performances (Grollo 2015 is on YouTube and is brilliant), but the production, the arrangement, the organ sound and the tantalizing slide guitar solo… no, that’s unmatchable. We have to put this recording on LaFave’s posthumous farewell album Peace Town ourselves. As the opening number, perhaps.

Tuva, Cherie & Severa

In general, nine out of the ten most beautiful covers are made by ladies. A cover of the untouchable “Tangled Up In Blue” is actually only tolerable when it is done by the Indigo Girls  (live, on 1200 Curfew), the unsightly Basement ditty “Clothes Line Saga” is polished to eighteen carats by The Roches, nobody sings “I Believe In You” as heart-breaking as Sinéad O’Connor, Barb Jungr has been building a breath-taking Dylan catalogue of dozens of covers for decades now and she delivers the most beautiful “Is Your Love In Vain?”, Emmylou Harris (“Every Grain Of Sand”), Mary Lee’s Corvette’s smashing song-for-song cover of Blood On The Track, Norah Jones’ “Heart Of Mine”, the “Mississippi” by the Dixie Chicks… we could go on and on.

The ladies enrich, in short, Dylan songs more often than the gentlemen. 

The same goes for “Not Dark Yet”. Without wishing to give offence to Jimmy LaFave or Eric Clapton, but they are of course more or less in the same corner as Dylan’s original: same cadence and same tempo, a carpet of guitars and (LaFave) remarkable phrasing. 

The ladies dare to step off the beaten track more often.

Rightly praised is the charming performance by Shelby Lynne & Allison Moorer. The accompaniment is beautiful, but not too spectacular (resounding Bridge Over Troubled Water grand piano and two acoustic guitars). The magic is provided by the ladies’ singing together – a similar marvellous harmony as The Roches and The Everly Brothers.

They miss the Top 3 by a few inches, though.

A sober, superb rendition can be heard in the Swedish film Små mirakel och stora (“All It Takes Is A Miracle”, 2006). The film is only moderately successful, but halfway there’s the scene where “Love” (a supporting role of the actress Tuva Novotny) sings “Not Dark Yet”. In a café, very lonely with just a guitar. Afterwards, the filmmakers realize that this is the real highlight; the song is chosen to embellish the credits.

Novotny sings it herself. Technically she’s not a great singer, on the contrary, but certainly with Dylan songs that is hardly important; it’s all about the emotion, after all. Which Tuva Novotny provides excellently. All the regret, resignation and fragility that even a Dylan can only bring at his best moments.

 

Even further away from the world of professional artists is the unknown nonprofessional Cherie Girard, who uploads her special, somewhat Massive Attack-like trip-hop songs to Soundcloud. Girard’s “Not Dark Yet” is accessible. Cheap electronics, minimal production and chilling vocals – and a brilliant dramatization after two minutes and eight seconds on London and gay Paree (and again after four minutes, in the coda); it’s actually quite staggering how much suspense can be evoked by crackling electronics, a clinical drum machine and Cherie’s inventive, echoing vocal arrangements.

https://soundcloud.com/cherie-girard/sets/cheries-songs

Scroll Down – Not Dark Yet is track 2.

 

However, the most dazzling cover comes from Slovenia: Severa Gjurin contributes a perfectly produced “Not Dark Yet” to a charity project on the occasion of Dylans seventieth anniversary: Projekt Bob Dylan Postani Prostovoljec (2011).

Again minimally dressed up, in a classic, slow-flowing arrangement, and the simple bass drone is a great enrichment for the melancholy atmosphere, but the real driving force, the anchor is Severa. Subterranean, veiled voice that she apparently can fully control; a slight vibration in a last syllable, then again threatening to break, and in the wonderful finale a subdued, controlled suite of three or four restrained Severa vocals.

Severa does bring mehr Licht. 

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Song to Bonny: another Dylan lyric that needs music adding

By Aaron Galbraith

Here is another Dylan lyric with no music, plus an invite to you to create the song and have it published here.

I’m going to go out on a limb and say it was probably set to the same music as Song To Woody…but who knows so if you are of a musical frame of mind you can do what they want with it!

It’s called Song To Bonny and was written in December 1960. I’ve transcribed the lyrics from the source material here to make it easier to read…

Song To Bonny

My Mother raised me tenderly
I was her pride and joy
She never meant for me to be
No wanderin’ homeless boy

I’m writing a song to a girl I once knew
It wasn’t so long but it seems so long ago
This ain’t no love song or none of its kind
It’s a song of remembrance of a girl in my mind

Hey hey Bonny I’m singing to you now
This song I’m singing is the best I know how
The song birds are singing their voices do ring
And I’ll think of you as long as they sing

Hey Bonny Beecher I think that you know
What I am doing and where I must go
Can’t give you no ring of diamond or gold
But I’ll think about you wherever I go

Springtime’s a comin’ and the grass’ll turn green
The flowers’ll bloom and the leaves on the trees
Will all turn in colors and all seem to shade
The Wild Mississippi where you sit and wait

Hey hey Bonny I wrote you a song
Cause I don’t know if I’ll see you again
I want you to know whatever I do
I’ll always remember that I once was with you

Remember me baby I’s good to you one time
I’m a wandering boy and you’re in my wandering mind
Or the last verse could be the other way round..I’m not sure!
I’m a wandering boy and you’re in my wandering mind
Remember me baby I’s good to you one time
I really love the verse that begins “Springtime’s…”

The lyrics date from about the same time as “Talkin’ Hugh Brown and “Bonnie Why’d you Cut my Hair?” and Heylin says it “appears to be Dylan’s first serious attempt to put a real girl into one of his own songs.   

Heylin also ventures the notion that the song may have been sung to the tune of “1913 Massacre” and tells us that Bonny later married Hugh Romney.

So if you feel in song writing mood and want to put your music to this set of lyrics please do so and send it in to Tony@schools.co.uk and we will publish it here.

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The Dylan nobody knows: John Brown & Tomorrow as never before

By Tony Attwood and Aaron Galbraith 

In the initial article for Dope Fiend a Robber we said….

“If you have never tried to come up with a completely new arrangement of a Dylan song, perhaps we might be permitted to reveal that it can be incredibly hard, not least because it is so difficult to get Dylan’s distinctive original version of the song out of one’s head”.

Now Aaron has found two pieces where the performer does exactly that… one by a group called Heron and one by Dylan himself!

First up, here is Heron with their take for John Brown…with completely different arrangements and music!

 

It appeared on their 1972 album Twice As Nice & Half The Price… 

The music here gives a more gentle introduction to the song, and we are inducted into the mother’s pride both with the accompaniment and the harmonies of the first chorus.  And even after the first singing of the chorus when the electric piano plays a few “twinkly” notes the other emphasis of the brilliance of what John Brown was doing is maintained.

Indeed the whole song becomes almost intolerable – no more than that – it is intolerable, because we know where this is going.  The “good old fashioned war” is unbearably horrible as it leads to the return of the son and the mother being unable to raise her eyes to look at the mangled body that is now all that is left of her pride and joy.  It is painful in the extreme.

And all the way through the melody bounces along…  It is a brilliant rendition because of the contrast it achieves.  A masterpiece of pathos and misplaced patriotism.

Here is the band’s website with some additional info.

http://www.heronfolk.com/about.html

Next up is Dylan’s 1970 take of Tomorrow Is A Long Time…it was recorded during the New Morning sessions with George Harrison I believe! 

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=3TFyA9LoP04

What is so interesting is that Bob does this as a 12 blues with what I think is (according to Tony) the back riff from “Smokestack Lightning” and then a do-wop type chorus backing.

This is one of those tracks that (in my view) doesn’t actually work as well as the version we know, but it is invaluable to those of us who love to understand what Bob does.  Clearly he does not get fixed on one version of a song, but explores it and experiments with it to see where it might go.

Here the music transforms the meaning completely – it virtually concocts a completely new style do-bop + blues around a song that I doubt many of us would ever have imagined could be played in this way.

And the Howlin Wolf riff in case you are not familiar with it…

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But what is complete is our index to all the 604 Dylan compositions and co-compositions that we have found, on the A to Z page.  I’m proud of that; no one else has found that many songs with that much information.  Elsewhere the songs are indexed by theme and by the date of composition. See for example Bob Dylan year by year.

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Bob Dylan And Post-Post Modernism

 

by Larry Fyffe

There are those who examine the inherently, if not deliberately created, figurative language of artists. Some look at art to uncover it’s meaning by referencing a standard outside the work, a moral standard that’s accepted by the culture at large (ie, its ‘God’). But other critics assert that to examine the piece of art by referencing the culture in which the artist lives is of little help – for how can anyone possibly know the ‘mind’ of an Almighty entity? In the end, what that measurement be is construed to be what it is by the examiner of the work at hand.

And there’s more trouble – double, trouble. What that absolute be is also construed to be what it is by the individual reader/listener to the work that’s been created. According to other analysts, you can throw in the fact that at least in western society the economic system known as capitalism dominates its cultural aspect. So assert today’s Marxists anyway. In short, everyone, including a supposed ‘objective’ examiner of a work of art, is a product of his/her own times.

Trudging on literary critics do by reducing the culture’s ‘god’ to being the author/creator of the piece of written or spoken art. But ultilizing this method, declare other critics, in order to ascertain the meaning of the work is likewise of little avail – what’s in the artist’s mind cannot really be known by an examiner thereof, and surely not by an uninformed reader/listener of the art work in question. Indeed, say other critics, the artist/author may not even be sure him/herself of what s/he thinks or believes. Furthermore, say others, the subconscious mind is by definition not under the control of an individual; as a consequence, surrealistic and symbolic imagery, often Freudian and sexual in nature, are consciously placed in the work of art in a dubious attempt to get around that problem.

Accordingly, as far as some analysts are concerned, the only way out at least for the artist to escape these conundrums is to release his/her grip on the work s/he creates, leaving the meaning thereof deliberately open so that the audience of the work takes part in the interpretation of what the meaning thereof might be. In effect, both god and author are ‘killed off’.

The following song lyrics can be interpreted as a sarcastic, albeit double-edged, reply to the Post Modern viewpoint (though it’s not quite clear whose side the author is on):

As I walked out in the mystic garden
On a hot summer day, a hot summer lawn
"Excuse me, ma'm, I beg your pardon
There's no one here, the gardener is gone"
(Bob Dylan: Ain't Talking)

https://youtu.be/Hx6fHd99SxA

On another level, the lyrics above can be considered an ironic reference to the visit by Mary Magdalene to Christ’s tomb where she’s given instructions as to what to do.

The lyrics of the poem below make it rather clear that the creator, the ‘god’ thereof, be the
poet/author himself – earlier the preRomantic poet composes ‘The Lamb’:

When the stars threw down their spears
And watered heaven with their tears
Did he smile his work to see
Did he who made the Lamb make thee?
(William Blake: The Tiger)

Nonetheless, the reader/listener who has an orthodox religious bent can claim that both poems by William Blake refer to a tough God who is softened by His Son Jesus. But then who or what made God in the first place is left unanswered.

Works of art by Modernists, seeking to make their art anew, often dispense with the chronological order of Time, but not with the search for an ideal utopia while Post Modernists fragment any mirror that reflects an Ideal of what is good and what is bad for humankind.

That the figurative tiger of terror can be interpreted as equally on par with the peaceful lamb raises the red flag of alarm for a number of artists as well for the literary analysts confronted with a Post Modernist viewpoint that presents oppressors and their victims as complementing one another. Some Post Modernists venture boldly onward, and predict that those on top today will be on the bottom tomorrow, and vice versa.

Post-Post Modernists like Carl Jung with his concept of ‘collective unconscious archetypes’ attempts to restore the ‘Romantic’ notion that goodness lies at the root of human nature. A difficult task indeed given that today’s world of high-technology leads to the development of thermonuclear weapons.

A negative view of human nature appears to be quite understandable, but not for the speaker in the song lyrics below:

What good am I if I say foolish things
And I laugh in the face of what sorrow brings
And I just turn my back every time you walk by
What good am I?
(Bob Dylan: What Good Am I)

https://youtu.be/JHo9_P4Gtd8

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Not Dark Yet IV  A languid lizard .

by Jochen Markhorst

 

I was born here and I’ll die here against my will
I know it looks like I’m moving, but I’m standing still
Every nerve in my body is so vacant and numb
I can’t even remember what it was I came here to get away from
Don’t even hear a murmur of a prayer
It’s not dark yet, but it’s getting there

 

 

Majestic is the word that often comes up in the reviews of “Not Dark Yet”, mainly due to the music, rather than the words. The lyrics are not really “majestic”. The words are dark and gloomy, the words of an old man who sees that the end is nigh, with no hope of a better world in an afterlife. The old man quotes from the Jewish Pirké Avot, the Proverbs of the Fathers (“for against your will you were created, against your will you were born, against your will you live, against your will you die”) but he does not quote the last words “and against your will you are destined to give an account before the Supreme King of Kings, the Holy One Blessed be He” – precisely the words that give a life purpose, promising an afterlife. The I-person does not see that light; I just don’t see why I should even care, he doesn’t even hear a murmur or a prayer.

And in between, between that Jewish proverb and the hopelessness that is so deep that even the murmur of a prayer can no longer be heard, are the three verses that most heartbreakingly express the desolate state of the narrator.

The first two are fascinating enough. “It looks like I’m moving, but I’m standing still” is a surprisingly intimate, moving way of expressing the detachment that the main character is now beginning to feel. Seen from the outside, he still seems to participate, still feel pain, fear, desire, but inside he is “standing still”, nothing touches him any more.  By the way, the protagonist here seems to be close to the lieder poet Dylan:

“I’ll be playing Bob Nolan’s Tumbling Tumbleweeds, for instance, in my head constantly — while I’m driving a car or talking to a person or sitting around or whatever. People will think they are talking to me and I’m talking back, but I’m not. I’m listening to the song in my head.”

…from the interview with Robert Hilburn in 2003, six years after the recording of “Not Dark Yet”.

Robbie Robertson, who has been inspired by Dylan songs since “The Weight”, takes the image with him to the first record on which he sings autobiographical songs, to How To Become Clairvoyant from 2011. In “This Is Where I Get Off” he talks about the breakup of The Band. The song opens with:

The Earth keeps on shaking but I'm standing still
The chances I'm taking against my will

Incidentally, a rather tasteful song, including a nice guitar duet with Clapton halfway.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2K3FED6JaVc

The depressing gloom of the physical diagnosis every nerve in my body is so vacant and numb is just as unusual in song lyrics. After “Not Dark Yet” it does penetrate to the rock idiom, though. In “Letter To Myself” by the short-lived rock band Mad At Gravity from California, for example (“My mind is mute / My nerves are numb”), in a song by the Beagle Boys of Quiet Riot (“Critical Condition”), the English starlet Diana Vickers sings “I feel numb, my every nerve has lost its feeling”)… but it’s all far removed from the poetic shine and existential extinction of Dylan’s narrator. The only one who can measure up to that is the giant Vladimir Vysotsky, the Russian Bob Dylan, Russia’s greatest song artist of the twentieth century.

Vysotsky’s own “Not Dark Yet”, the masterpiece “Песня готового человека” (“The Song of a Man at His End”) from 1971, as well as similar poems by Rilke and Trakl, reveal Dylan’s artistic soul affinity with the True Greats:

И не прихватывает горло от любви,
и нервы больше не в натяжку, – хочешь – рви, –
провисли нервы, как веревки от белья,
и не волнует, кто кого, – он или я
.

Love no longer grips my throat in a fit;
My nerves are numb, you can rip them off, if you will;
My nerves like washing lines are hanging loose,
And I don’t care who it is – him or me.

The song opens with the brilliant metaphor A languid lizard crawls in my bones and elsewhere the listener is struck by Dylanesque, despondent verse fragments like Wounds do not ache, and scars do not hurt and I’m not looking for a philosopher’s stone anymore – Vysotsky’s I-person is as exhausted, beaten man as Dylan’s protagonist and the Russian has a similar talent for expressing that.

Vladimir Vysotsky – Pesnja gotovogo čeloveka:

The most beautiful verse line, also the longest of the whole song, closes this trio: I can’t even remember what it was I came here to get away from.

It is a brilliant line, which unites song tradition, a philosophical paradox and poetry. In the mind of the walking music encyclopedia Dylan undoubtedly buzzes around the song he played in ’67 with the men of The Band in the basement of the Big Pink House; “I Forgot To Remember To Forget”, Elvis’ first country hit.

That song varies through the antithesis forget/remember on the otherwise not too revolutionary theme unforgettable love. Classics like Hoagy Carmichael’s “I Get Along Without You Very Well” (sung by the entire premier league, but Frank Sinatra’s version is inviolable – at most Chet Baker can stand next to it) and Dylan’s own “Most Of The Time” (1989, Oh Mercy), which are based on that same theme, derive their lyrical power from the reversal; the main character emphasises line after line that he doesn’t miss his ex-lover at all, but makes it increasingly clear line after line that he can’t forget her; 

I've forgotten you just like I should,
Of course I have,
Except to hear your name,
Or someone's laugh that is the same,
But I've forgotten you just like I should. 

The in itself already attractive paradox I’ve forgotten you (if you’ve really forgotten her, you don’t remember that you’ve forgotten her), Dylan deepens with this one line I can’t even remember what it was I came here to get away from. His poetic instinct tells him to avoid the word forget – that would make it an Elvis or Sinatra paraphrase in one fell swoop. Rhythmically it would fit better, though. An obvious alternative like I can’t even remember what it needed to forget has fourteen syllables, thus following the structure of the song; the other verses all have between eleven and fourteen syllables.

Dylan’s intervention stretches this verse line by 150%, which doesn’t have to be a problem for a Grand Master of phrasing, of course. The singer Dylan does tackle bigger challenges (his record being the twenty-two syllables he squeezed into one verse line of “Summer Days”: She says, “You can’t repeat the past”. I say, “You can’t? What do you mean, you can’t? Of course you can”).

Nevertheless, despite his unequaled phrasing, the musician Dylan intervenes; the slowing down of the tempo, mentioned both by producer Lanois and guitarist Duke Robillard (“the version we recorded in Miami was slowed down”) probably has a lot to do with this very line. By switching back to long, languid melody lines, the singer Dylan doesn’t have to “cram’ the line here, thus saving its shine – like a black pearl in the semi-darkness.

It is a majestic verse line.


Jochen is a regular reviewer of Dylan’s work on Untold.  His books are available via Amazon both in paperback and on Kindle:

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Is Bob Dylan a plagiarist? A consideration of the evidence.

By Tony Attwood

Tales of Bob Dylan having taken the music or lyrics for his songs from earlier published works, go back at least to Blowing in the Wind (allegedly taken from No More Auction Block), and have continued ever since to include elements of his Nobel Prize Winning speech, and most recently “False Prophets,” in relation to the 1954 song by Billy “The Kid” Emerson.

The songs have strong links, but within the Dylan song however there are some subtle changes – extending and curtailing the number of bars and beats in the bar – the sort of thing Dylan likes to do, and which changes the feel of the song even if you can’t quite understand what is going on.  Plus of course they are about totally different concepts.

Now Bob Dylan hasn’t exactly hidden the use of the original – the key is the same, the feel of the music is very similar, and the musical changes Dylan makes are ones that probably only a musician is going to recognise.  Plus if anyone needed an extra hint, Dylan has played songs by the composer of the original on Theme Time Radio Hour.

Dylan, in other words, is clearly stepping out and saying, “this is what influenced me – I’m not hiding anything.”

But if it doesn’t matter that Dylan uses part of the music of a blues song, in his own writing, what’s the difference between this, and the famous George Harrison case when he was ordered to pay $1.5m in damages for having taken the song “He’s So Fine” and turned it into “My Sweet Lord”?

The judge in the Harrison case said in his judgement, “Did Mr Harrison deliberately use the music of ‘He’s So Fine’? I do not believe he did so deliberately.  Nevertheless, it is clear that ‘My Sweet Lord’ is the very same song as ‘He’s So Fine’ with different words, and Harrison had access to ‘He’s So Fine.’ This is, under the law, infringement of copyright, and is no less so even though subconsciously accomplished.”

So yes, copying music and lyrics matters legally.  In the USA copyright on a composition lasts for 70 years from the end of the year in which the songwriter (or last-surviving songwriter if written by more than one) dies.  Billy “the Kid” Emerson is, I think, still alive, aged 92, so the song is still in copyright and will remain so until towards the end of the 21st century.

So copyright matters legally.  But does it matter morally?  Was Bob Dylan trying to hide the fact that he had borrowed the musical essence of the song, and put new lyrics to it?   I’d say probably not, or at least if he was it was a pretty poor way to go about it – to take a song from an artist he himself had promoted on his own radio programme.

Therefore we do need to ask, what is the issue here?  Are the people who complain that Bob Dylan is a plagiarist doing so because they want the law upheld, or because they want to see Bob Dylan brought low by being prosecuted, or because of some fundamental moral position that they are adopting?  And is some poor blues artist having money that is rightfully his, kept from him, by Bob Dylan?

Of course I can’t tell, because I can’t read minds, and I don’t know if any arrangement was made between Bob and Billy Emerson, but the way the point is put to me by people who don’t care for Dylan’s music very much, seems to suggest that they welcome any way they can find of knocking him.  For their commentaries seem to focus on a sudden interest in the moral principle of copyright, which they rarely consider at other times.

Copyright and plagiarism laws exist to ensure that the artist gets the just reward for his labour, just as the man employed to repair my garden fence got rewarded for his work when it blew down last year.  But we have to recognise that such laws have boundaries – you cannot claim any rights under any law for an idea.  The idea has to be put into practice for it to become something you can protect.  My garden fence man did not have to pay a royalty to the first person who thought of putting a wooden fence with vertical slats between each garden.

Copying songs and evolving them into something else has been the tradition in folk music and popular music from the earliest days.  Traditional songs and folk songs have appeared and re-appeared in many forms and they are not protected by copyright.

At which point we are left with an array of questions.  Where did Billy “the kid” Emerson get that riff?  Did it appear on a song before he used it?  Did Bob Dylan’s agency discuss the use of the riff with Mr Emerson’s representatives?  Is the use by Dylan similar enough to Mr Emerson’s to be a copyright infringement?

Now to that last point you might say, “They sound just the same”, and yes, even allowing for Bob’s fun and games with the length of the bar in odd places, the accompaniment Bob uses is very similar indeed to the original.   But the law doesn’t say “the accompaniment has to be the same” for a copyright case to be made.  In fact it doesn’t mention accompaniments at all.  It talks about “works”.

But there is another legal point, and that is that prior to 1 March 1989 any work created in the USA had to have a copyright note attached to it for its copyright to be something that could be claimed in law.  The 1954 song that Dylan has utilised most likely did not have such a copyright notice attached, at least I’ve not found one as I’ve gone a-searching.  And so is not registered for copyright.  In which case no copyright breach.

However it is also quite possible that Bob Dylan has made a financial arrangement with Mr Emerson to be able to use the accompaniment in his piece.  It is also possible that Bob contacted Mr Emerson, played him the new song, and Mr Emerson said, “Man, I can now die fulfilled.”

And here’s another point: is it possible to copyright the accompaniment?  Normally speaking accompaniments of songs are not written down at all – it is the chord sequence, the melody and the lyrics that are written down.  The accompaniment is made up in the studio.

Yet, it maybe argued, even if there is no legal case that could be brought against Dylan, surely for him to take the accompaniment and not put a note to this effect on the song, is wrong.  He ought to admit it!

Well, up to a point maybe.   One of the great problems with western music is that it only has 12 notes available.  Once you get past the 12 you are simply repeated the note an octave higher or lower.   Even more restrictive is the fact that in Western music not every note is available for use – the variety of notes enables us to be able to perform in different keys.  This song only uses six notes.

So is a riff  – a melody and a rhythm, protected by copyright?  Almost certainly not (I say “almost” because I am not aware of any case being fought out in court to give a definitive ruling on this).  The song “Making a liar out of me” which I was raving over in my last piece on this site, has a melody based around four notes.  Can you copyright that?  I can’t see how.

I’m not a lawyer, but I suspect that you need something as nailed-on similar as “My Sweet Lord” to “He’s So Fine” and full compliance with the law in terms of registering copyright for a case to stick.

“But he’s still copying,” claim those who like to knock Dylan – and I think that phrase is interesting because it reminds me of school days.  Children do copy when they are supposed not to, and they can be punished for it.  But they are copying exactly – the whole thing, (usually the answer) and that is what is wrong.

Let me try an example from another position.  There are some people who suggest that Christianity is a copied religion because it took elements from pre-Christian religions and beliefs and incorporated them into Christianity.  Those who deny this then might reply that “When one takes the time to study the similarities they suggest, it’s quickly apparent that the differences are actually much greater than any commonalities.

Now in that definition of copying it seems that percentages come into play – that to be copying over 50% has to be copied.  Or maybe just 30% – or was that 80% – I don’t know because the writer of that comment isn’t clear.  Dylan has copied some of the music, but the whole essence of the song including the melody, is different.

Which makes the point: how much copying is copying?  Is Dylan’s use of the accompaniment of a song enough to make it plagiarism?  Or is the accompaniment and some of the melody enough, even when the lyrics are completely different, (along with quite a bit of the melody?

The answer is, “who knows?”  For there are no rules.  From my modest knowledge of the Copyright, Designs and Patents Act (1988) of which, as a writer in the UK, I have some knowledge, no that is not enough to get a conviction.   And we may notice that the “My Sweet Lord” legal case went on for weeks before the judge gave a ruling, even though the two songs were incredibly close in the way they sounded, so we’re not going to resolve this in one little article.

Dylan, in his lyrics and musical accompaniment, uses references from music and literature, and he does this because that is the essence of his work.  He takes America’s past and re-works it.  And people point the finger.

But did anyone even raise an eyebrow in complaint when Manfred Mann sang “Hubble Bubble Toil and Trouble” in 1964 because the record label did not acknowledge Macbeth? (Actually the only complaint I think came from English teachers saying that the quote actually was, “Double double toil and trouble”.

My point is that in the arts, borrowing goes on all the time and always has done.  The work of genius is not measured in originality alone, but also in the taking of what is already there and going further.

To get worked up about Dylan taking musical phrases, lyrics and ideas is to misunderstand not Dylan, but the whole notion of art.  Art is about taking what we have in the world, and going a step further.  Only occasionally is a work of art utterly original.  One might nominate “Guernica” and “Like a Rolling Stone” for originality because they take the form to new places, but not the “Mona Lisa” because that was just another portrait.  But that lack of originality does not stop it being a work of utter genius.

To claim that Dylan copies other people’s work is not only to misunderstand what Dylan is doing in terms of his relationship with the past and the present, but to misunderstand the whole of western art, and (if it is mentioned) the copyright acts that exist in various countries.  It is like saying Bach’s “48” are copied because the Fugue in each case follows a strictly laid down format.

Dylan examines the world, be it a set of study guide notes on Moby Dick or the novels of Junichi Saga, and reworks what is there into his new context.  And indeed at least Junichi Saga had the decency to say he was honored that Dylan had used some of his lines.

Yes things can go too far.  Led Zepplin did go too far with “Whole Lotta Love” which really was awfully close to “You Need Love” by Willie Dixon and they settled out of court because it introduced nothing new.  The music was very similar and both were about love.  That is where there is a problem – not with a referential work such as False Prophet.

If Dylan’s False Prophet is compared with “If loving is believing” we see extensions and new ideas.    “You need love” and “Whole lotta love” are songs of the same message, genre, style, approach, affirmation and a dozen other things.

 

It is as if the people who are complaining here think that songwriting is a sort of writing by numbers.  Please allow me, as the composer of one song which has appeared on this site, to confirm.  It isn’t.  At least it isn’t when you try and create a song that might be worth hearing once or twice.

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